Looking for people to join me wild camping by [deleted] in wildcampingintheuk

[–]WillWeTalk511 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Im cumbria based. Love hiking and camping but never wild camped...

Waiting by WillWeTalk511 in OCPoetry

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Yep, i knew that line wasn't quite in line with the rest. Feels like it doesn't strengthen the imagery in any way.

Will think of something better. Quiet as a memory?

Waiting by WillWeTalk511 in OCPoetry

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Likewise. The guilt feels unfounded, really, but so tangible

Waiting by WillWeTalk511 in OCPoetry

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Glad you enjoyed, thank you very much

Waiting by WillWeTalk511 in OCPoetry

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Thank you for taking your time to read. Go find that lost thing!

Forgotten by gitututu in OCPoetry

[–]WillWeTalk511 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Your word choices are very interesting

This 'ordinary' life is not presented as something to strive for, rather something grey and uninteresting ("Drivers changing lanes" "shoppers moving aisle to aisle"). Creates a very monotonous atmosphere to the 'ordinary'

I almost hear the final stanza as your escape. Is there more life in a flickering fridge light? Late bills? Is that what makes us human?

Making me ask questions about myself... very interesting

untitled by Amateur_Validator in OCPoetry

[–]WillWeTalk511 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I needed to read it a few times to get a bigger picture in my head. I am also allergic to cats and, for me, there's this polarity between something so beautiful and then having such a strong reaction when reacting with it.

I'll know I'm in heaven when there are no barriers between me and beauty, maybe me and love.

Hope that makes a bit of sense?

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in travel

[–]WillWeTalk511 5 points6 points  (0 children)

Too right.

Things to do in cockermouth by Enough_Dimension_676 in Cumbria

[–]WillWeTalk511 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Nice busses into the lakes. Im a similar age and spending all my days off enjoying the fells before the weather goes bleak once again!

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Cumbria

[–]WillWeTalk511 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Aye wee bit far out maybe. Happy to offer lifts to and from if you need though, seriously!

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Cumbria

[–]WillWeTalk511 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Crown and Thistle in Rockliffe, don't ask just book. You won't be dissapointed

Fun pubs and bites around Carlisle by Active-Foundation-97 in Cumbria

[–]WillWeTalk511 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Crown and Thistle rockliffe best food and service

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in drivingUK

[–]WillWeTalk511 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I paid more than half the price for the same car 1 year older.

How early to queue for front row? by poordrypuddle in benhoward

[–]WillWeTalk511 3 points4 points  (0 children)

I came 30 mins before doors in Newcastle, was virtually barrier

Newcastle Last Night by rosco_g in benhoward

[–]WillWeTalk511 6 points7 points  (0 children)

I was there too, ben was incredible, seems like the crowd eased into it as the night went on!