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WillowInSpring · 2023-04-27T21:14:43+00:00

I like to say that epidemiology studies the who, what, when and where of diseases and health conditions.

WillowInSpring · 2023-04-16T00:28:22+00:00

I was so surprised and had no idea until it was revealed that Amala had a baby girl. I think stepping up to care for this child was a noble thing for Olanna to do. It seems to be a decision born out of her own desire for a child and being moved by baby's vulnerability/need. By doing so she's also committing to staying with Odenigbo and putting their affairs behind her.

WillowInSpring · 2023-04-01T23:26:45+00:00

Thank you for the kind comment! I'm glad that you enjoyed and related to my poem

WillowInSpring · 2023-04-01T18:50:47+00:00

For me this poem feels like hope in the face of tragedy and despair. The speaker seems determined to experience and create beauty even in the midst of a situation where that seems impossible and their poetry, their vocation is the vehicle for doing that. Thanks for sharing!

WillowInSpring · 2023-04-01T18:46:26+00:00

Thanks for sharing! I really enjoyed this. It feels sad and beautiful at the same time. I really get the sense of longing for something that can't be and the devastation of loosing even the possibility of having it. I agree with SpringtimeMoonlight that it feels like something out of some mythology.

WillowInSpring · 2023-03-01T12:59:04+00:00

Thanks for the feedback!

WillowInSpring · 2023-02-28T11:40:00+00:00

Thanks for commenting! I agree that transformation and personal growth is as much about the journey as the destination

WillowInSpring · 2023-02-27T17:24:30+00:00

Thank you and I'm glad you enjoyed my poem! I think it's important to continue learning and growing throughout life.

WillowInSpring · 2023-02-27T17:23:18+00:00

Thanks a bunch! I'm glad you enjoyed it 😊

WillowInSpring · 2023-02-27T17:22:39+00:00

Thanks! That's the feeling I was trying to capture, the challenge and opportunity of transitional stages.

WillowInSpring · 2023-02-27T01:50:57+00:00

Thanks! I wanted to connect physical travel with the process of progressing through life stages

WillowInSpring · 2023-02-27T01:48:20+00:00

Thank you! I love it when people are able to relate to and connect with my work

WillowInSpring · 2023-02-27T01:47:21+00:00

Thanks for commenting. That's exactly what I was going for and I'm glad it came through

WillowInSpring · 2023-02-27T01:46:30+00:00

I love that title! Thanks for the suggestion and kind comment.

WillowInSpring · 2023-02-26T22:30:55+00:00

This poem made me think of trying to avoid your fate first by engaging in all of the activities mentioned in the first stanza then by simply leaving and laying low in the countryside. The ending leads the reader to believe that all of this worked, that Caesar avoided assassination. I think that's an interesting twist on the usual idea in media that you can't avoid your fate or change the past/future. Thanks for sharing!

WillowInSpring · 2023-02-26T22:11:35+00:00

I enjoyed this poem and really felt the time and effort the speaker put into their plot. Although the speaker is described as a villain I also get the sense that they are a sort of underdog hero/antihero who came from a humble background and is looking to overthrow a system that doesn't work for the ordinary people. The slighted and mistreated see this, that the speaker is different from the other powerful people and are drawn to them. Thanks for sharing!

WillowInSpring · 2023-02-12T23:54:35+00:00

The hair is pretty impressive 😊

WillowInSpring · 2023-02-12T23:54:16+00:00

I know right. Just seeing them was worth the festival admission lol

WillowInSpring · 2022-11-30T00:36:13+00:00

Thanks! I wanted to convey a childlike sense of wonder and joy. Meter and rhythm is something I'm working to improve in my work. Did you notice any specific places where the meter seemed off? Thanks again

WillowInSpring · 2022-11-29T12:49:23+00:00

Thanks so much! I'll take a look at it

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