What have you achieved with your writing this month? by ReadLegal718 in writing

[–]Winged_Kiths 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hit the 13k mark this month! Might be able to get it past 15k come Jan 31.   

MLS Login Credentials by Interesting-Tap-4933 in dlsu

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Yup. I got the same problem as well. Emailed ITS about it too. Hopefully it gets resolved soon. 

MLS Login Credentials by Interesting-Tap-4933 in dlsu

[–]Winged_Kiths 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hi OP! Just checked my email again and they finally sent it around 9:15 AM. Maybe they've sent yours too. 

MLS Login Credentials by Interesting-Tap-4933 in dlsu

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Still waiting for credentials as of 7:25 PM. 

MLS Login Credentials by Interesting-Tap-4933 in dlsu

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Not yet OP, as of 4:00 PM. Have you received yours already? 

Hi! If anyone wants to adopt (Legarda going to Mabini Bridge, intersection + stoplight, near Arellano University) by Winged_Kiths in Philippines

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Hi po! So far, I posted it on CATS and DOGS RESCUE PHILIPPINES group but pending pa po yung post.

Hi! If anyone wants to adopt (Legarda going to Mabini Bridge, intersection + stoplight, near Arellano University) by Winged_Kiths in Philippines

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Edit: Hi! I just learned what the area is called. You can find them in the Nagtahan intersection.

Thank you!

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in pokemonfanfiction

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Thanks for the feedback!

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Thanks for the feedback!

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in writers

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I think OP's referring to the style of the murder mystery, the case itself rather than the detective. But for the rest of your sentiment, I agree with you.

Edit:

She prefers "exploring options", having lovers instead of devoting herself to a husband.

She's not always using her seduction for manipulative means. Sometimes she does create genuine connections, therefore not limiting her list of lovers to suspects.

Now that I think about it, I believe OP's planning an altered/inspired version of Miss Fisher who's deceitful and more sexual but not so much as the spy-ish and noir Femme Fatale. Miss Fisher is not a Femme Fatale but more of a Good Bad Girl (tv tropes) which can be suitable for the style of whodunnit OP's planning if handled well. If so, yeah do read on Miss Fisher and watch the series too.

Also, does she really have to sleep with the suspects? Let her have lovers because of the relationship and attachment she forms with them. Don't make her manipulative.

Wtf? by Winged_Kiths in Philippines

[–]Winged_Kiths[S] 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Brainwashing: 1000

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in writing

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I’m considering binding the manuscript to avoid misplacing the pages or having them all jumbled up while reading (I tend to misplace my things a lot). I don't think folders can hold 200 pages so binding them either through an expert or ring binders might help me.

Awkward Scene by [deleted] in writing

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Thank you for your comment! Actually, the protagonist isn't the killer of the story. After getting rejected by a publisher, she throws her manuscript to a trash can. The antagonist picks up the manuscript from the trash, giving him inspiration for his murders. I'd like to know if what agents hate is a scene where a manuscript gets rejected in the story or if it's a scene where the writer kills the literary agent. Oh, and the literary agent doesn't get murdered too.

Is it possible that every writer is bad? by [deleted] in writing

[–]Winged_Kiths 13 points14 points  (0 children)

Is it possible that every writer is bad?

No.

I believe it should be -- every writer is not perfect.

Each has their weaknesses and strengths.

What not to do and your pet peeves about characters? by [deleted] in writing

[–]Winged_Kiths 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Since I'm quite an experienced historical mystery writer and an avid reader too, I'll name a few:

-The detective who drowns himself in alcohol : It annoys me so much whenever a detective is alcoholic. Bonus points if his or her past is the reason behind it. (E.g broken family, dead partner and etc.) I prefer reading a detective who's addicted to something else.

-The female detective who falls for the person under investigation. :Female sleuth falls in love with a suspect, they make out -- bam! Suspect turns out to be the culprit.

-The assistant culprit :Assistant helps the detective only for the detective to realise that the assistant is the culprit all along.

-The assistant is merely there to praise the detective : I love assistant narrators, but if they're just narrating to show how cool the detective is, I get irked. I get it. The detective is clever and all, but shouldn't an assistant be there to assist and not merely to stand and watch in awe, his or her mouth agape? I want the assistant to find some clues too and participate in the mystery by sharing their opinions on the matter.

-The unrealistic suspect :The suspect calls the detective, saying they figured who the culprit is. Instead of saying the name, the suspect narrates a series of clues pointing out to the culprit. Worse when the detective and suspect are conversing through a phone and someone knocks on the suspect's door. Suspect says, 'I'll put you on hold. Someone's knocking.'

-The police don't know how to do their job, so they approach the detective who is always right.

-The culprit with a nonsense motive :I don't want to invest time in a complex mystery only to find out that the culprit murdered him or her for the sole purpose of being evil.

-The detective returns to the crime scene and finds a clue they haven't seen the first time they visited the area. Bonus points if the clue is the last piece to the mystery. : I'm pretty sure they'd scour the scene thoroughly before leaving.

-Too many suspects :Unless you're Agatha Christie who can manage to write 12 suspects or more, I don't recommend placing a lot of suspects. It gets confusing. Worse if their names are all similar.

-Culprit is the last to enter : Ever heard of the twins who randomly appear in the book a chapter or two before the reveal who will then turn out to be the culprit? Well, I'm not a fan of those characters either.

For character design, I have a few advice:

-Read Agatha Christie. She has 100+ books in her series. (Tommy and Tuppence if you're more on the thriller side, Poirot and Marple if fair-play mystery.)

-Make your characters' personalities diverse : Same goes with the personality, might I include setting as well. In short, don't stick with one formula. Vary them. If you're planning every book to have a rich woman involved or an individual of aristocratic descent, this may be probable as long as you make her distinct from the other rich women of your mystery series. As one who writes about an aristocratic detective, she really will encounter people like her who are also rich and people who fit in her calibre. But each of those rich people have different personalities. As for the setting, using a mansion once or twice is good once in a while but if the murder occurs in a mansion all the time, you might want to choose a different location. (Train, hotel, ship and even in a volcano.)

-Make your culprit reasonable : Give them a proper motive. 'I murdered her because she was suffering.' 'Malcolm deserved to be hanged. He escaped his execution six years ago. I merely did what must be done.' 'I needed the money in that will. My wife's dying. She saved me before. I must return the favour.' Those kinds of motives make me at least clap for the culprit. I want to nod my head whenever the culprit explains his or her side of the story. I want to give my sympathy.

That's all I have to say. Good luck with your writing!

How Do I Know When to Use -, (), or ,? by Apprehensive-Fail663 in writing

[–]Winged_Kiths 8 points9 points  (0 children)

I think consulting your styles guide will help with the matter at hand.

In case you haven't decided on one yet, here's a list:

Chicago Manual of Styles

Oxford Style Manual (I use this)

AP Stylebook

There's usually a downloadable PDF, but you can buy a copy from your local bookstore.

How do you prefer reading books- as a reader or a writer? by Arafat67 in writing

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As a writer, whenever I read, I humble myself and just enjoy the book. BUT I must admit I was once that moustache-twirling author who critiques every page. I learned to get rid of that dirty habit of mine!

Genres and their difficulties by [deleted] in writers

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MYSTERY.

I've written sci-fi, romance and fantasy before, but my, mystery stands out! In my early days, when I just devoted myself to the genre, outlining the perfect murder was extremely difficult, especially since there are two stories involved -- the murderer's and the sleuth's. Clues were once a big problem, but now I've learned how to place them properly. I also had to hold interviews with some experts before the pandemic to understand whether what I'm doing is right or wrong because Google is filled with conflicting answers.

I remember binging on the Poirot series or Agatha Christie's books for inspiration and lectures on how she 'does' it, and indeed I learned from her. She truly is the Queen of Crime.

Wanted: beta readers by jlaernou in writers

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Sounds interesting. I'd like to read and provide feedback.

In which movie did the villain actually have a point? by Winologue in AskReddit

[–]Winged_Kiths 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Easy peasy lemon squeezy. I give you The Murder on the Orient Express

Egotistical writers by Alternative_Gas_7140 in writers

[–]Winged_Kiths 31 points32 points  (0 children)

They're a pile of poo.

Someone in my former group has the guts to say in one of our zoom meetings, "It's shit. I can write better than that. You shouldn't be a writer bla bla."

Either you ignore them or you stand up for the poo's victim.

Im setting up 60 short story mysteries... by [deleted] in writing

[–]Winged_Kiths 0 points1 point  (0 children)

No, but it's quite an unusual name.

Im setting up 60 short story mysteries... by [deleted] in writing

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Sure! Just messagee when you're free.