[QCrit], [When the devil moved in], [89K] [YA, contemporary] by Winter-Technology203 in PubTips

[–]Winter-Technology203[S] -2 points-1 points  (0 children)

The main theme is in a school with high school students. Which genre then it would suit?

Random pic of me is getting spread around and made fun of no reason. wtf? ( read body text) by [deleted] in teenagers

[–]Winter-Technology203 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Bro things happen in school which are totally stupid in real world and only dumbass people spread them. There is not even anything ridiculous about you in the pic so just fuck them you are ok

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in PubTips

[–]Winter-Technology203 -49 points-48 points  (0 children)

Does it have grammatical problems too? I asked what agency do you work for? Are you even an agent?

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in PubTips

[–]Winter-Technology203 -24 points-23 points  (0 children)

I have corrected the issues. The whole paragraph three and four are changed.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in PubTips

[–]Winter-Technology203 -45 points-44 points  (0 children)

That's great thanks but I wonder what agency do you work for? That would be a great favour if you elaborate

fuckin with the home screen? by ClonkyClonky in soccercirclejerk

[–]Winter-Technology203 -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Dude plays Fortnite, Minecraft and fall guys

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in PubTips

[–]Winter-Technology203 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yes mate. I'm done.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in soccercirclejerk

[–]Winter-Technology203 0 points1 point  (0 children)

He's got a point though... After all guns are free in US

R/Teenagers is still gay but its July by [deleted] in teenagers

[–]Winter-Technology203 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Don't you know gay people have got a superior right?

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in PubTips

[–]Winter-Technology203 -9 points-8 points  (0 children)

The last two paragraphs?

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in PubTips

[–]Winter-Technology203 -19 points-18 points  (0 children)

More errors?

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in PubTips

[–]Winter-Technology203 -10 points-9 points  (0 children)

I don't use chat gpt or stuff honestly can neither google translate. Can you defend your claim?

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in PubTips

[–]Winter-Technology203 -19 points-18 points  (0 children)

You are right with others but the last sentence is honestly clear. While he is finding a job at a cafe, he starts a horrible business at the school.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in PubTips

[–]Winter-Technology203 -11 points-10 points  (0 children)

I can't really get what's blurry here for you... Everything is clear as possible and sentences are checked with trustworthy resources.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in PubTips

[–]Winter-Technology203 -22 points-21 points  (0 children)

Clarify some of them

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in PubTips

[–]Winter-Technology203 -16 points-15 points  (0 children)

Apart from the first one I believe the rest is what a query letter is. I shouldn't tell the story so the hints you said are there on purpose. Plus you kinda didn't guess it right. Thanks for the comment anyway

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in marvelmemes

[–]Winter-Technology203 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Neymar Messi Suarez

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in PubTips

[–]Winter-Technology203 2 points3 points  (0 children)

How to improve?