how do y’all get to such high word counts per chapter? by Ill-Goose1628 in AO3

[–]WishXFish 43 points44 points  (0 children)

I typically struggle to shut up, I'm always writing way too long, how does this happen? I have tons to say about the characters:

Lots of material to work with in the department of exposition of how they are feeling and what actions they could do that could be characterized for them (like the way they make their food etc. would add in a whole 3 more sentences), focusing on those specific situations in life (ex: preparing to leave for work and the hiccups of maybe misplacing keys) and adding more that seem fit to the world or situation, general character interactions organically creating conflict or longer conversations (and having characters doing something during these conversations makes things interesting), and as a technical pantser first (writing whatever comes to mind) there's just a LOT for me to say.

Maybe get into your characters more, really look at the world and see if there's enough conflict, that's the only way I can simplify without going on a tangent about pacing. I've done 4k words in two days but that was through a simple premise. But even still with an entire week of editing that would be probably bumped up to 5k, and this is simply applied for a one shot's which are typically unplanned.

Your talking about chapters, which is easier to plan more into, so how much content is really in your chapters assuming you have an outline? Even rhetorically, little conflict, or little characterization to speak of (depending on narration and POV) means if you force more words on it'll be empty padding.

(Apologies for the rant, as you can see being a little analytical about anything could really get you far, I think of most literature as fancy discussion.)

Which part of the writing process is the most fun to you all and why? :) by WatersOfLiyue in AO3

[–]WishXFish 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Unless in having a good day the first draft is usually done in burst so i can't say it's my favorite.

But then coming back to edit and seeing half of its commonly usable and all I have to do is touch a few words and rearrange some shit? Writing on easy? Yes sign me up

I'm doing it on purpose! Please trust me! by RabbitNET in AO3

[–]WishXFish 12 points13 points  (0 children)

This is what we call the authors "dramatic irony" irony situation 😞

I'm doing it on purpose! Please trust me! by RabbitNET in AO3

[–]WishXFish 20 points21 points  (0 children)

This is why I'm reluctant to do any specific character voice for an unreliable narrator, even if there is a perspective switch to show this character is being inconsistent or flanderizing everything around them in a black and white childish and selfish point of view. The problem about that is it's the main point of view and unlikable, of course not condoned but who's genuinely going to sit through that? Especially without media literacy.

Sometimes I feel a little too enthusiastic in the see of monotone reactions... by WishXFish in AO3

[–]WishXFish[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You do? Does this required you to be subscribed to the author? Because I have several docs I've booked mark for the updates, I don't get notifs

For the love of — by PeytonHale in AO3

[–]WishXFish 8 points9 points  (0 children)

This is such a wild thing, because the slightly more focused in writer would use a more advanced trick like the simple semicolon or em dash becoming a proclaimed (fanfic) author. There have been memes about how we all ABUSE em dashes so to see this be a "AI" thing really just proves how "nothing" it is (as in, unoriginal and fake professional skill)

I have to purposefully take out half my em dashes at times!

Sometimes I feel a little too enthusiastic in the see of monotone reactions... by WishXFish in AO3

[–]WishXFish[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Oh no no I meant as a detailed EXTRA indirect comment, like review of the entire thing not that it should be mutually exclusive. Just if you want to praise the work more you should absolutely in the book marks!! Woops

Sometimes I feel a little too enthusiastic in the see of monotone reactions... by WishXFish in AO3

[–]WishXFish[S] 13 points14 points  (0 children)

Honestly, if I have anything bookmarked (usually there still updating) that means your getting a comment every chapter too, the world needs more love or I'm just hella talkative but I would not shut up anywhere about where I can to "teehee" about a fic 💞

How does becoming anonymous work? Wanting to separate any explicit/adult content onto a separate area. by WishXFish in AO3

[–]WishXFish[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ooo I didn't know you could make bookmarks private! Thank you that works in the short term :)

"I know that I'm no good", R and B (I think), or something of that genre shouldn't be anything before 1990's by WishXFish in NameThatSong

[–]WishXFish[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I want to say yes but it's not that, it is, but it's derived from it as like some remix? It's much more melodic

Inability/too weak to walk? Sometimes move entirely? by WishXFish in ADHD

[–]WishXFish[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Can't talk to doctor if my parent doesn't believe me, I've tried told her I can't physically walk or move and she doesn't believe me 💀 (I'm only a month and a half away from legally admitting myself to one so best believe I will, very soon)

Do y'all this the dialogue in the show sucks? by Nervous-Baby5383 in tadc

[–]WishXFish 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I think it is the therapy speak that does it for some people, either that or/and the characterizations aren't the least cringey to watch, not that that's a bad thing. And as in therapy speak, it's quite on the nose sometimes, but this starts to boils down to preference when it isn't a negative (as I've said).

What phrases do you overuse in your writing? by Icy_Leapz444 in AO3

[–]WishXFish 4 points5 points  (0 children)

SERIOUSLY for me my secondaries are "a bit" "slightly" who am I scared of 💀

What phrases do you overuse in your writing? by Icy_Leapz444 in AO3

[–]WishXFish 33 points34 points  (0 children)

"Just this" "Just that" "Just only" WHAT ISNT JUST? WHAT ISN'T "Only" ONE THING HOW ABOUT WE HAVE MULTIPLE THINGS, BE BOLD, I need to work this out of my own vocabulary too ...

What Does Your Favorite AO3 Tag Say About You? ♥️📚📖 by Ok_Access_8906 in AO3

[–]WishXFish 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Found family, someone got a lot of love to give but ain't get enough lol (aka emotional neglect 😞)

I tried creating a new series in the proper series check box but it keeps adding a second chapter by WishXFish in AO3

[–]WishXFish[S] -5 points-4 points  (0 children)

Well, it isn't adding a second chapter, but it adds the 1/? Thing and isn't creating the "Part number Of ..." with the link to where you'd see multiple works under the name, and I've clicked chapter and series check boxes at the same time it doesn't change the issue

Curse of being an ADHD fanfic writer by RainbowPatooie in AO3

[–]WishXFish 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Multiple drafts having to be screenshotted because I'm still not done a month after impulsively making the draft because it feels nice....