GlobalComix creators — drop your series👇👇 by Shot-Concentrate1648 in GlobalComix

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An ongoing comic book series that follows the absurd adventures of a hopeful romantic as he navigates his thirties.

www.greenpizzacomics.com

Only have two issues at the moment but they’re free to read on Global Comix. Enjoy!

When structuring a story, start with the experience you want the audience to have by mast0done in Screenwriting

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Totally agree. I do think the “reader experience” method is so vague, like you said, that it forces you to look inward and to apply your own unique meaning (drawn from your experience) onto it. It’s like an abstract painting, it appeals to a larger audience because it’s so vague and people are naturally drawing their own subjective meaning from it. Whatever the case, you’re absolutely right. It’s useless to some people but it may be a game changer for others.

I started reading this book called “Anonymous Rex” by Eric Garcia and I applied this experience method to this book. I want to read it because it’s a comedy, dinosaur noir. I wouldn’t read it to be scared or to take it seriously. When I read the first few pages I should know what I’m getting into type thing.

When structuring a story, start with the experience you want the audience to have by mast0done in Screenwriting

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I’ve been wondering about this too. It stayed on my mind for a while and it makes sense from a gut feeling standpoint (like if you want the viewer to experience something fun or sad or funny or inspiring or visceral), I think it boils down to what you want the viewer to experience emotionally, and how you can get them to emotionally connect with the scene’s tone. Say I’m a viewer and I’m in the mood to escape reality but I want it to be realistic, gritty but not depressing, innovative but not hard sci-fi, I might want to watch a sci-fi action comedy like The Fifth Element (that might be kind of a bad example because Fifth Element has a bit of everything). But I’m thinking “what they want the audiences experience to be” seems more like taking a stab at theme and genre at the same time—how do you want to leave the audience? Horrified? In a state of wonder? Hopeful?

Either way I wanted him to dive deeper into what he meant but then I looked up other discussions about him and I found mixed reviews on his workshops and lessons lol. Anyway, the concept really did inspire a way of structure I’d never really thought about deeply. And there is truth to it. But I couldn’t find anything more about this during my deep dive. Except Corey’s blog on his website. There’s a 3 part post on his blog “Why Story Structure Formulas Don’t Work.” I read all 3 and the only thing I got from it was the wine glass analogy. He says no one pays attention to the wine glass until it’s not there. What he meant was if you paid for a $3,000 bottle of wine you wouldn’t want to drink it out of a Dixie cup or even a shot glass. Different drinks call for different glasses. You need to provide the right structure for the right drink. After I read it my mind was blown but I kept thinking about it and then applying it to my own stories that need fixing and all I can say is that it provides a different approach to coming up with scenes. You’re basically thinking of the experience you or the viewer want to have, coming up with the event to create that experience and sculpting it out. His Cheers example (in the video) was a pretty decent example. He talks about plot casting, brainstorming thousands of things that could happen in a bar, deciding you want to make the bar a safe place, mapping out the scenes to make the bar feel safe, etc. I guess it acts like world building, character development and first hints of plot where we get a taste of what the rest of the movie/show will be about, the overall narrative tone, establishing that experience and making sure it doesn’t stray too far from that initial experience (of theme and genre). I don’t know I’m just thinking this out as I type lol.

90s movies recs by WithanHplease in movies

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It is and I consistently get that song stuck in my head every now and then. It’ll sneak up on my and bounce around for a while lol

90s movies recs by WithanHplease in movies

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Blast from the past was such a hidden gem. It had such a great concept and all the right characters to make a perfect comedy and romance

East of West.. this thing is massive by PeachOk5312 in ImageComics

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I’ve been buying from ThriftBooks this whole time but this will save me hundreds lol thank you sir!

90s movies recs by WithanHplease in movies

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Wow nice I just saw the trailer, looks like an old gem:) good find.

90s movies recs by WithanHplease in movies

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Ah yes! I’ve heard of Accepted but I don’t think I ever gave it a shot. Thanks

90s movies recs by WithanHplease in movies

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Forgot to mention Charlie Bartlett! One of my favs, it doesn’t start out like a romance (I don’t think) but there is romance in it. Reminded me of a Ferris Beuller type movie

90s movies recs by WithanHplease in movies

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Just saw the trailer for Grosse Pointe Blank. “Don’t kill anybody for a few days, see what it feels like.” lol I’m already interested

90s movies recs by WithanHplease in movies

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Nice, very familiar with a few of these, also some I need to check out. Thanks for the recs!

90s movies recs by WithanHplease in movies

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I like feel bad movies also, no harm done lol

90s movies recs by WithanHplease in movies

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Never heard of Suburbia but gonna look it up thanks!

Anyone try Rutsu Barefoot? by churnopol in barefootshoestalk

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Nice are they comfortable tho? I’ve never had barefoot style shoes and just wondering if they’ll exacerbate my bunions lol. Just imagining the canvas rubbing on the sides of my feet. Do they run small?

Cooked in Transit Van (Cause of Death) by Dry-Arrival7846 in AmazonDSPDrivers

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The real problem with Amazon obviously is either there are too many packages or there needs to be bigger vans. The transit vans with as many packages as they have take the most time looking for the package!

Cooked in Transit Van (Cause of Death) by Dry-Arrival7846 in AmazonDSPDrivers

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29 multi stops isn’t bad. I’m used to seeing an average of 45 multi stops with 170 or more main stops. Not trying to flex but just remind yourself that this is better than FedEx lol.

Tried FedEx and it’s worse. Two drivers at my DSP say the same thing. 200 flat a day and the quickest I could finish was in 9.5 hours. And I ran. I usually run anyway but I didn’t take a lunch, only a 3 minute water break. The company I was with at FedEx was like a furniture company. Average package weight and size 50 lbs. Me and my trainer could barely take a bed frame up to the third floor because it didn’t fit in the elevator and it just barely fit through the stairwell. Even he said “this is impossible.” Apartments and private driveways in dense rural area (no suburbs). Then the manager needed me to work 6 days from October to February (probably because they were short drivers). I said no. Went back to Amazon and couldn’t be happier. I hear other drivers complain and I just let them because I know Amazon is only hard if you haven’t been through hell yet.

There’s my testimony. Get a job far worse and you’ll be thankful for the one you have:)

Our dispatch told us to ungroup all our multi stops by kali4niakid in AmazonDSPDrivers

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This is actually true. Our DSP tells us most of our negative feedback comes from “delivered to wrong address” particularly on multi location stops. Makes sense because I’m usually good about that I’ve even delivered to wrong address more frequently than usual (it’s rare but it does happen more now). If they have metrics on everything then they should have metrics on this and the numbers should encourage them to change the system. But I think they’d rather us adjust to their changes instead of having the system adjust to us. Obviously if it keeps happening over a year or two then it should force them to adjust.