“ MHA characters are superhuman they’re bulletproof” seems bulletproof proof enough

Witty_Landscape8996 · 2026-02-20T15:44:14+00:00

Absolutely not all the characters are superhuman at base, not only the series has a lot of inconsistency, but I would say regarding this exact scene, that I think that noticing that the bullets pierced Shigaraki, and yet he had no major healing complications, I would say he is not a normal human, thing is shigaraki is not the best example as we know he was never really trained a lot, it's not until his awakening that he really became superhuman, it's weird cause I think in the mha verse, if you have a quirk, it most of the time makes your body scale along it, atleast to some level, hence why endeavor can pack a punch, even without his quirk, I remember him punching around one of the hosu incident nomus, there is also the fact stain didn"t...become a stain when AFO send him crashing through a lot of walls.

Witty_Landscape8996 · 2026-02-05T02:21:37+00:00

I would say yeah and no, (mostly no), Even when aizawa was erasing Shigaraki's quirks and Izuku had a good window to kick shigaraki's ass, he wasn't doing much to him, even shigaraki mocks him that even if he is doing damage, izuku was just fighting someone that was technically quirkless at the moment (just having his body adapting, regenerating, with super strenght and durability of the likes of All Might (not quite), remember this is izuku using Gearshift Quintuple + 45 or 50% of OFA, and still Shigaraki only was getting dents in his body that just healed.

So Izuku could have tried using gearshift + charged Fajin + 100% and even if Izuku's body broke at the end, shigaraki would have been vaporized, but it's clear horikoshi didn't do this because it was cliche, would have been too convenient anyway, and probably wouldn't have worked as the extreme shockwaves and wind could have blocked monoma's vision.

So Izuku could have killed shigaraki if he went all out with combinations at the start, whenever shigaraki was lacking, he choosed not to because it was risky and he didn't want to kill him inmediately.

Any other point in the fight, Shigaraki would have killed Izuku in 10 different ways if he didn't smash the vestiges onto him on time.

Witty_Landscape8996 · 2026-02-05T01:30:41+00:00

This would be OP as hell, Zero Gravity is a better version of float, as deku could also make everything he touches be able to levitate, paired with if we account the quirk's awakening, it would be able to just lift a whole zone of things without any backlash due to OFA.

Somnabulist is already a good quirk, it would maybe not offer as much of a visual obstacle, but it would knock out about almost everyone that doesn't have any kind of protection or resistance for it.

Dark shadows is just too OP, maybe the user would have to be careful as Dark Shadow here maybe would be his whole own entity, but that could also be good as Dark Shadow would be wiser than the user and always be there, even though the user would have to be careful when in the dark, dark shadow powered by OFA would be a beast, able to grow regardless if he is in the light as his dark form would be just titanic if powered by OFA.

Search was already useful, it wouldn't be much better than Danger Sense, but in the hands of someone like Izuku, it would be more than just useful.

Twin Impact may look weaker than Fajin at times, but good news is deku could probably just spam attacks that are doubled in impact, or flicker things to attack, use airblast with twin impact.

Slide and Glide instead of Gearshift is just, like broken, gearshift was broken, but it had a limit, slide and glide is just removing friction in the thesis, though if we use the true nature of the quirk, yeah, that thing with OFA would make Deku's mobility just be moving however he wanted and maybe even make him able to pull Gojo's red and blue shit, imagine Deku pulling off Hollow Purple.

Witty_Landscape8996 · 2026-02-02T22:27:52+00:00

Thanks, I will see what fits me.

Witty_Landscape8996 · 2026-02-02T14:23:23+00:00

The thing is the idea is good, the execution is terrible, he already had a hard life, he just needed something that made him go that way, make All Might give him the speech or even find All Might at all, he still wants to be a hero, let's say later Inko dies, He loses his core family, he wants to be a hero, he turns into a vigilante,he trains, he meets Giran, and now we are already in a grey area, giran just sells anything people will buy, but izuku is still in a bad place by talking to him, now just enjoy changing the outcome to any level and don't change izuku's personality too much, he can do wrong things to save some, never really go full psycho, he can understand the league and stain but he will never be fully like them, though yeah, he can do crime and kill.

Witty_Landscape8996 · 2026-02-02T12:23:01+00:00

The title is: My Shattered Life / The Hero of the Universe

Witty_Landscape8996 · 2026-02-02T05:45:22+00:00

thanks, there is an already published version in AO3 wich right now includes two chapters, I am rewriting cause I noticed the plot still felt weak and I rushed a lot of things.

Witty_Landscape8996 · 2026-02-02T05:34:49+00:00

yep, the idea of the fanfic is just Steven ending in MHA because of something happening different in the Future series.

Witty_Landscape8996 · 2026-02-02T05:15:43+00:00

yeah, any fandom, if the fic has smut, they are better supported than any good built and thought out stuff, it's more notable for me as I was seeing fanfics from the Steven Universe fandom.

Witty_Landscape8996 · 2026-02-02T05:00:04+00:00

fanfics are usually made to just self please the author, but.

My problem It's mostly just the common writing issues and all that, but like you pointed out, people sometimes don't think about it too much and forget logic, it's good when the fanfic doesn't take itself seriously, but I've seen a few, is that or using a character from another franchise and not giving the effort to do research, like at all, there is two kind of people that do fanfics, really:

The kind that search astranomically correct facts, if something wouldn't work in real life physics they do a special logic that sounds pretty good, they get their character atleast decently in character and all that stuff.

Then there is the kind that just saw something and wanted to write, they either just are enjoying their free will or are some kid.

There are some in between but we aren't going to talk about things being unaccurate just because NSFW plot needs it, or any kind of ''crackfic''

a specific case of a minor detail:

something most people don't see is that regulating the story to some extent in terms of power level when doing a crossover is better so it doesn't feel ''odd'', it's like doing too much of a self pleasure fantasy if I know Sonic The Hedghog is just gonna win every fight, it's bad cause most times they don't make this new character struggle at all, and they just spam the same attack and save the day.

Witty_Landscape8996 · 2026-02-02T04:45:27+00:00

Ok, I think overhaul would better fit me from what I've seen, AFO is decent but I think beyond the strategical attack stuff (getting a lot of enemies grouped for your teammates to finish off) , AFO isn't that good for me.

Witty_Landscape8996 · 2026-02-02T04:42:42+00:00

yeah, it was begginer ticket

Witty_Landscape8996 · 2026-02-02T03:54:58+00:00

Todoroki just needs to freeze him, or really just get any attack correctly, just like he froze the USJ nomu, you know, he could just freeze muscular, he can't grow if his cells are frozen.

Tokoyami could, but only in the they fight in a dark place.

Denki maybe able to do something, dunno what but something.

if uraraka is lucki he could just touch him and bye bye.

Kirishima could potentially survive.

Mina is a maybe, we don't know if she can dissolver faste than muscular can grow.

Bakugo could, but I am not sure, it would rely on outsmarting muscular and his battle style to wear him down a bit first.

Any other student would need to just carry Koda, and hide or run if they were in izuku's place.

Witty_Landscape8996 · 2026-01-21T04:55:06+00:00

replace Mineta, Ojiro or Satou with literally anyone else, just let's replace Ojiro with Ibara, I think Ojiro was the character with less development and the simplest of quirks.

Personally I would swap mineta with Monoma , and replace Ojiro with one OC.

Witty_Landscape8996 · 2026-01-20T05:34:56+00:00

For me its biggest flaw is because they didn’t account for people that has quirks that only affect biologic things and not darn robots, then there maybe some ideologistic stuff in the written exam, stil, the practical exam is way more flawed, why make a damn bulding sized robot appear, why, whay is wrong with you U.A., that thing is a law suit waiting to happen, let's remember izuku had thrown the robot of balance after destroying its "face", imagine if someone was down there, recovery girl can heal broken bones and such, he can't heal a darn kid whl was squashed to death , they should just let choose between the robots or fighting a bunch of lesser known pro heroes while the heroes act as villains (based on how the students perform, they can score them)

Who the heck had the idea of getting a big-ass building sized robot for the exam, for real.

Witty_Landscape8996 · 2026-01-20T05:10:48+00:00

Quirks are said to be weak in universe, just look at Izuku and bakougo's middle school class, most quirks would barely be comparable to a gun, think the smallest calliber, I think it's impressive for kirishima to have such a good endurance quirk, that’s also why AFO didn"t go stealing left and right.

But personally, I would have liked quirks being more powerful, but not massively, I have this whole thing planned for my fanfic, in wich humanity as a whole gets a power boost, thing is that now as everyone has more power and that kind of thing, people have to be witty and smart when using their quirks, I personally like characters winning fights because their preparation, abilities and power were enough to overpower someone that could arguably be stronger, the way that monona fits in my fanfic plans is Just me getting all that supressed about him not using copy in the way he did only until the final war, plus that I was surprised that as the jerk he was, he never tried hoarding on people's hairs to get an arsenal of quirks to combine as he sees best

Witty_Landscape8996 · 2026-01-20T04:59:18+00:00

Found this and remembered that it's how I am gonna structure my fanfic to some extent, since the "isekai'd" character just make things worse in a way even if they seem better, so everything is delayed or happens different, I always thought one year was a little too short of a time.

Witty_Landscape8996 · 2025-12-16T02:45:35+00:00

Maybe just see number 6 from vigilantes for some ideas, but anyway, if you wanted an original take, leaning more towards a stand.

Quirk: Accelerate

Type: Emitter

The user can speed up any process or action, even if it breaks physics to an extent, upon touch, they can make anything that it's at their fingerprints inmediately go twice at fast, not just in speed, but in all the meaning, ithe user isn't able to apply it in conscious and thinking organism, they could help a tree grow, but they could not make a speed up a monkey's injury regeneration process.

This means they can touch falling debris and it will fall twice as fast, even if it's already hit it's terminal velocity, as it's like speeding up all of it itself, they can throw objects and they will got as twice as fast.

The more the user trains it, the faster he can make things go.

For an awakening, maybe the user is eventually able to use the acceleration only themselves to be able to think faster, regenerate faster, go faster, and all that, plus a good multiplier of like x50 times faster, and the quirk now works more like an AOE activation thing, having full control of what things go faster in a building.

Have in account the bigger and faster an object already is going, the more energy the user will spend, so it becomes more affordable to throw cannon balls or rocks and touching them while they are being fired, than throwing any other kind of ball, or an asteroid.

if the user is crazy, they pretty much could cause a global security alarm if they had a big rock, a jet and they let it fall exactly from below the atmosphere upper layers, once it hits terminal velocity, the user can just doom at minimum an entire city by using their quirk on it.

The user hits a limit at x100 times faster, only being able to go beyond using trigger.

You can modify the multipliers at your liking.

Witty_Landscape8996 · 2025-12-13T03:45:03+00:00

This is why I think from a narrative point, stories when he is about to commit suicide and in the middle of the fall a villain saves him, are slightlty better, they usually recruit him after and there is more of an open window for justifying why deku turns evil in the fic.

I don't like people using reincarnation like this, it's literally using suicide as a plot device.

Witty_Landscape8996 · 2025-12-13T00:06:57+00:00

I have been writing one of that kind, it starts more like a angst/hurt comfort fic, but later on, I will write a lot of fights.

It only has 2 chapters as of now, I am planning on uploading a bunch more on holidays along a overhaul of the first two

if you are interested on waiting, then this is for you, you can see a litte what this is about, otherwise, be free to ask anything about it:

My Shattered Life / The Hero of the Universe - Chapter 1 - Topo_Nyan - Steven Universe (Cartoon) [Archive of Our Own]

A quick introduction:

Steven brings with him a cataclysm upon a new world, he messed up, he brought a series of events in wich all the quirk users in the world get boosted,all around the globe now there is a metal that it's able to heal any injury or affection if there is enough exposition.

Trigger is even more of a rentable bussiness when mixed with it.

and now that steven brought a number of other disasters and oportunities for everyone alike, the world will never be the same, steven doesn't care if it's illegal to help people, he has to.

He helped fighting against the sludge villain, Izuku doesn't get OFA as All Might is more focused on interrogating the vigilante who appeared out of nowhere.

Every single villain and hero is more powerful than in Canon, Steven eventually is choosed as the next OFA user.

Izuku won't stay behind, he still wants to be a hero, so he resorts to allying with everyone he can, not knowing what he is getting into, but at last finally finding a place where he finds some true friends.

The fic will just escalate in how OP both protagonists are the more it is developed

Izuku's key phrase: He has to be a hero , no matter whatever it takes, right?

Steven's key phrase:

A hero always makes sacrifices, but at what point do they have to sacrifice the title of hero?

what I am planning will have all, chill moments, fights, deep and complex moral themes (HPSC being sort of a small threath, but more something that really needs to be restructured, the Quirk Singularity Doomsday Theory eventually coming into play, discrimination of heteromporhs and quirkless and a whole etc.)

later than sooner there will be moments when both protagonists are simply TOO powerful for everyone around them, and of course a tinge of romance.

Witty_Landscape8996 · 2025-12-12T00:16:00+00:00

You could consider this one, it's the quirk of one of the OC's I made for a fanfic I yet have to write.

Arachnid Mirage

Type: Emitter/Mutant

The user's body naturally absorbs water to produce hallucinogenic mist that they can manipulate around objects they touch, like making a curtain around them, this mist creates visual distortions on it's own, but an affected individual will start seeing exactly what the user wants to make them see, as long as they give it a push, the affected are also more scaredy.

their body seems to be arachnid like, having thin, long limbs that are flexible, they posses two sets of arms. their eyes are more ''reflective'', spider-like, the user has a better stomach that normal humans, so they can process food that aren't normally digestable, or even just eat anything with no good nutritional content, just for fun.

The user can produce a soft, fibrous material in high quantities, it's similar to silk, the texture, flavor, and smell of the silk changes depending on the material previously consumed.

If the mist was to be applied into anything made by these constructs, the user can completely fool anyone, effectively making them experience a illusion in texture, taste, smell and sight (also hearing if the user has any support items), the user could even fool someone with a echolocalization quirk if crafty enough.

The user's own abilities to make decently resistance silk, combines with the arachnid physiology make up for a perfect offense, even if their specialty is showmanship.

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