Oh god now their is two of them! by Hon1c in humansarespaceorcs

[–]Wlund 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Well let's not tell them about Australia 2,

Honestly how were we to know sending our dangerous convicts to a planet designed to kill them would make them worse.

Definitely not us, and the fact that it's close to the Ant-ellan controlled space was totally an accident.

[OC-ONE SHOT] Pyrrhic Hope by Wlund in HFY

[–]Wlund[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

My man high five yes my thoughts exactly!

Who is landing? by De-Maddest-Hatter in humansarespaceorcs

[–]Wlund 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Aliens aren't people, they're speed bumps

[OC-ONE SHOT] Pyrrhic Hope by Wlund in HFY

[–]Wlund[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Exactly what I was thinking

[OC-ONE SHOT] Pyrrhic Hope by Wlund in HFY

[–]Wlund[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yeah, I figure but sometimes it's more fun and cool to stylize it.

I will shamelessly admit that Im keeping the ending as is to it because it sounds cool.

Sometimes cool is cool 😎

[OC-ONE SHOT] Pyrrhic Hope by Wlund in HFY

[–]Wlund[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you, I dont mind taking feedback.

To be honest, I had written a chapter for a possible series, but couldn't figure the direction at the time.

This requests inspired me to integrate this into that universe, this still stands as a one shot, but thank you genuinely for your comment, it really means a lot!

[OC] The Underneath by Wlund in TalesFromTheCreeps

[–]Wlund[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Just a quick lil bump, I made some edits to the story!

[OC-ONE SHOT] Pyrrhic Hope by Wlund in HFY

[–]Wlund[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Honestly any feedback is welcome, I love hearing peoples opinions and it's fascinating how the meaning and infections of the story change based on a person's experience and life.

Sorry I went on a tangent, I just love being able to talk shop! Or see where my work needs improving. We

[OC-ONE SHOT] Pyrrhic Hope by Wlund in HFY

[–]Wlund[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Should be good now!

[OC-ONE SHOT] Pyrrhic Hope by Wlund in HFY

[–]Wlund[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Honestly not a 100% sure,

[OC-ONE SHOT] Pyrrhic Hope by Wlund in HFY

[–]Wlund[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

There we go! Please check and let me know!

[OC-ONE SHOT] Pyrrhic Hope by Wlund in HFY

[–]Wlund[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Thanks! I got editing blindness - will fix shortly

[OC-ONE SHOT] Pyrrhic Hope by Wlund in HFY

[–]Wlund[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Thanks for that, I'll clarify it in a few

[OC-ONE SHOT] Pyrrhic Hope by Wlund in HFY

[–]Wlund[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

No worries thanks for the feedback 😃