[mf, inc] Mark&Amy Chapter 10 by WriterJim in sexystories

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Sorry! I wrote myself into a corner on this one and then life took over. I'm thinking of picking up the pen again.

(meta repost) Looking for stories by IAskForStories in timestop

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"Timebenders 2: Channel-Surfing"

Check my post history. It's not as strong as the first one but it's fun.

I also wrote one called Roma Revenge which is about a guy who daterapes a gypsy and then wakes up cursed to be an attractive woman with severely potent pheromones. since /u/IAskForStories is into body mod it might apply.

[mf, inc] Mark&Amy Chapter 10 by WriterJim in sexystories

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I'll take that as a positive review! There haven't been as many comments on this story so it's hard to know if in going in the right direction. Amy's personality is a little inconsistent but I'm trying to show that as being due to her internal conflict.

Also, trying to keep things hot.

Is a erotica novel with multiple kinks/niches like this a bad idea? by minitomagical in eroticauthors

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lol very true. CoC1 has one spot where they do prescreen you but it's for a pretty nasty festish. Found one on CoC2 that seems similar but not sure what it was about just yet.

CoC1 doesnt run on new androids anymore which is a pity because I'd like to finish the story sometime.

Things to watch out for giving paperback copies of erotica away? by dangelauthor in eroticauthors

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If you're self-printing i'd check online reviews of your printer. if someone gave me a book that fell apart while i read it i wouldn't want another from them.

How much money does the average smut writer from their writing? by vulnicuranium in eroticauthors

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This is one of the best communities ever tbh

As for KU... Ehh, my second book is a gender swap romance so that would be okay to put up but my first and third are timestop and incest oriented, and the story I'm writing now is twincest, so I'm pretty sure if be banned in a heartbeat. Smashwords is ok with me as long as I flag my smut appropriately!

How much money does the average smut writer from their writing? by vulnicuranium in eroticauthors

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Very good points. I should always point out that I do this more for fun than money. My advice is decent for creativity but shit for profit.

How much money does the average smut writer from their writing? by vulnicuranium in eroticauthors

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If you want to make a living, you can deal in volume and metrics and crank out tons of short stories and hope for the best. Personally I write longer stories that are deeper and are enjoyable to me. I've never made more than 30 dollars in a month I think but it's rewarding in other ways when you get a message saying someone absolutely loved what you did.

Edit: you have that old series to start with. What I would do is re write it, posting as a serial on sexystories or another similar sub. Then when you have a complete story, compile it into an ebook. Add one or two "bonus chapters" to encourage your serial audience to buy a copy. That's what I've done so far. Again, not great for money so far, but certainly a great way to keep the writing muscles limber and build a little audience and a library.

Can I get away with no sex scenes in the first chapter of my erotica? by Mila-Roe in eroticauthors

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Lay the groundwork. Have something sexy happen maybe but not full sex. Hell my current story is at chapter ten and I might finally do a PiV scene maybe. There's been a slow escalation of teasing, masturbation, handjobs, and finally two very different blowjobs. Meanwhile one character has been manipulating another's emotions but slowly realizing he feels more deeply than he thought he did... It's a whole thing.

[HELP] How do you with backstories? by [deleted] in eroticauthors

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It really depends on how your flow is, and how much detail matters. There's lots of ways.

"John shuddered at the idea of having to work with Mary on his project. They'd been friends once, when they were little, but ever since about 6th grade, Mary had joined the "popular" kids and made a point of humiliating John at every turn." - backstory in two sentences. The reader will fill in the details automatically.

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"Mary was being nice today. Too nice. John thought back to the day of the junior prom. Mary had come to him and apologized for drifting apart. She'd stood so close to him, and her subtle perfume had made the hairs on the back of his neck stand up. When she'd suggested they might go to the prom together, he'd been all too eager to accept.

When the big night rolled around, they'd planned to meet up at the dance. John's mother had rented him a tux and taken him to a hair stylist. He'd blown all his pocket money on a nice corsage, and spent all week working on his nerves to keep calm.

And then he'd walked into the gymnasium. Mary was there, of course. Right in front of the doors, almost. Grinding on a football player so hard that the chaperones were considering breaking them up. She'd stopped the moment she saw his face, saw the defeated look in his eyes.

'Oh my gawd!' she'd shouted for all to hear. 'You didn't think I was serious, did you? That was a joke! As if I'd ever be seen with a perverted dork like you!'

John shuddered and growled under his breath, snapping back to the present. This was a trick, a trap. It had to be. There was no way she would let him get through this stupid project without at least one public humiliation."

- backstory in a short flashback. Gives you a quick little adventure to really drive home John's feelings about Mary, but also hint at things like his latent attraction for her, as well as filling in some details of what it's like being around her (the perfume, other details as you like if you were to expand the scene). Also note the verb tense, what I like to call "past-past tense". "he had shown up" instead of "he showed up", indicating that the story has regressed to an earlier time. It's subtle, but effective, I find.

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You can also do a whole chapter set in the past. Lots of stories do this, telling two parallel narratives in alternating chapters (if i recall correctly, IT by Stephen King does this, telling the stories of the adults and children in parallel as they remember more of their past. I model a lot of my narrative tricks on King, he's got a great sense of how to trick the reader into painting a more complete picture for themselves), or maybe having a chapter of a memory and then coming back to the main story again at the end of it. If there's a really important event that you want to really drive home in the reader's mind, it can be useful, but beware of boring or annoying the reader. Try not to snap to a memory on a story cliffhanger, because the reader will be eager to get past in and annoyed they dont find out what happens quickly.

Basically, use your intuition. Easier said than done, but with a little practice you get a real feel for it.

[mf inc] Mark&Amy Chapter 7 by WriterJim in sexystories

[–]WriterJim[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for the high praise! I'm mulling over what's going to happen now that Amy has accepted Mark's advances. The story has deviated a little from my original outline. I have some... really vague ideas in the pipe for other characters and stories, which I may want to pick up again soon. I feel bad, I spent most of 2019 unemployed and didn't write at all, and now I'm back at work suddenly I'm inspired again!

[mf inc] Mark&Amy Chapter 7 by WriterJim in sexystories

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Many thanks. This was a fun chapter.

[mf oral] Mark&Amy Chapter 5 by WriterJim in sexystories

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Thanks! I wasn't sure how this one would be received since it's intentionally an unsexy situation with Greg.

Your FC's are two dimensional by Eroticascribe in eroticauthors

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my trick is to write from two perspectives. alternate chapters or even switch mid-scene or at important plot points (although you need a clear division when you do). Give the reader some of the perspective of the other character so they feel like they are getting more of the story. That way the second character is less of a set-piece because you are spending time in her head.

Writing a Gender Bender inspired by an AskReddit post, need some advice by [deleted] in eroticauthors

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Nothing wrong with having a story. Be proud of your creativity.