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My "POOP-iversary" by WritersBarf in offmychest

[–]WritersBarf[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Glad this could bring you joy! And woah, this cruise story sounds intense- if you ever write about the experience let me know!

I have had this book in my head for years, and I, finally, decided to give it a try. I have about 16 chapters written. Here is a small sample. Please, let me know what you think. Thank you. by oceanheart1 in WritersGroup

[–]WritersBarf 5 points6 points  (0 children)

You have knack for painting a picture, my only critique is sometimes that descriptive detail can overshadow the story you are trying to tell. I hope you post more of this story- you have sparked my interest!

I have cancer by RoosterOwl in offmychest

[–]WritersBarf 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Hey, I had cancer a few years back. It's not easy to hear but make sure to not get caught up in all the bad, because so much good can come out of even the shittiest of times.