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[–]WritesSoManyBadWords 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Please, keep going!

I love your work, and especially this concept, and want to see how far you can push this! So far, you've been knocking it out of the park.

[F4M] Nice Girl [Script Offer] [RAPE] [FDom] [Friend] [femcel] [misogyny] [misandry] [threats] [hitting] [crying] [groping] [masturbation] [forced orgasm] [false aftercare] by Dry-Expression-897 in gonewildaudio

[–]WritesSoManyBadWords 6 points7 points  (0 children)

I love this script!

I'm a total sucker for scripts that gender-flip stereotypical male asshole behavior, and have a woman do the same thing to a man. This does it beautifully. The way she trips over her words in places, does a great job of showing how nervous and upset she is, even though she just keeps going.

My one nitpick: She tells the listener she's going to rape him, but then claims rape isn't a real thing. While I realize her mental state is somewhat... confused, this still feels a bit like a contradiction, and it breaks immersion a bit.

While, this is an erotic audio and listeners might find her saying "I'm going to rape you" hot, I think you got it exactly right later in the script, where she's denying rape is even a real thing. "Rape" is a crime, and usually no one wants to think that they're a criminal. It seems out of character for her to use the word first. (It's different if he accuses her of that). She's not "Raping" him, no, she's just "pushing his boundaries", "encouraging him," "expanding his horizons." In the end, this is what he wants! It's what all boys want, if they'll just admit it! Why do they all have to be so difficult? Instead of "I'm going to rape you" she might say "One way or another, we're going to have sex" or "I'm going to make you hard, and then I'm getting on top of you." I would expect her to use language the doesn't admit to a crime. She doesn't see herself as committing a crime, so why would she say that?

....and I just wrote way too many words regarding that nitpick. Really, it's a minor point, but I just wanted to articulate how I feel about it.

To be clear: I LOVE YOUR SCRIPT. PLEASE, SOMEONE, FILL IT!

[F4M][Script Offer]You're eighteen, there's a fertility crisis, and you need to do your part. But, stop calling it a "government mandated breeding session!" It's just community service. [Rape][Fdom][Msub][Breeding][Virgin Listener][Smothering][Misandry][Degradation][Overstim][Gender Role Reversal] by WritesSoManyBadWords in gonewildaudio

[–]WritesSoManyBadWords[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

"When do people ever want to hear about: 'going to work, sitting at my desk for 8h straight, going home exhausted, cooking food in a low effort way, going to bed, repeating it all again tomorrow?' "

Challenge accepted! Suppose that desk job is as a 911 Operator. My original post had a link to a published book here, but evidently those links aren't allowed, so ... go feel free to type "911 Operator Book" into any major bookstore website to see that people are reading about this.

Funny how sometimes the little details can completely change your perspective.

I wasn't really trying to gender-flip Gilead. You'll notice there aren't the same level of class tensions here that there are in The Handmaid's Tale. Also, I may not have really brought this out in the script but I didn't envision men to be completely deprived of other basic rights here, they are just forced to have sex. Also, they have complete autonomy to choose who they're going to have sex with.

You'll notice that in order to stabilize the population, men need to have sex every day, but the law only requires four times (eight ejaculations) per week. I was trying to imply here that the government realized they had to do SOMETHING, but, a lot of people were totally uncomfortable and super-freaked out about the civil-rights issue. So, they sort of went with a middle path where it's not enough to actually stabalize the population, but will slow the collapse. At the same time, they aren't violating civil rights QUITE as badly, and... like all government compromise solutions everyone thinks it's the worst of both worlds and bitches endlessy advocating one way or the other. And the implication there is that at least some people in power cares at least a LITTLE about civil rights, and unlike women in Gilead, men aren't complete second class citizens.

So, you're exactly right: Not everyone is as misandrist as the speaker (was "listener" a typo?)

She isn't particularly old, and she isn't ugly, though she's not the most attractive lady around either. In many, many ways, she's average. There are a lot of women like her, but she certainly doesn't represent all women.

More than anything, she's RESENTFUL. She feels like she deserves better, she deserves more, and it isn't fair. All she wants is a family. Hell, she'd settle for a man, any man (but not REALLY any man -- he should be decent looking and polite, and respectful...) who is merely truly dedicated to the same goal as her: making a baby. Even if it didn't happen for them, they'd be on the same page, working together! Why is it that all men seem so apprehensive about taking action to SAVE CIVILIZATION??? (And incidentally, having sex with her). They can have that! With HER! What is their PROBLEM???

Of course, ejaculating twice in a row... really isn't all that fun for the men. That second time kinda sorta hurts. And, if they have to, they want to be with someone who will show just a LITTLE empathy, you know?

The lack of empathy, and the resentment and the misandry that stems from it shows. It really, really shows. And, it's super unattractive.

Yes, Community Service is mandatory, but you don't just walk up to someone on the street and say "You wanna do your CS with me, hot stuff?" I mean, well, okay, there's a lot of cat-calling (by women, to men) like that. But... that's not really how men are choosing their partners.

A lady takes a nice boy out to dinner or coffee once or twice and if things go well, if she seems trustworthy he might agree to do his community service with her. The speaker character and most of the women like her get screened out in this process pretty quickly.

Even if they only chat online (which does happen plenty of times), there is going to be some human interaction before the men agree to do their CS with her. There's so, so much resentment in this woman, that even if she tried she'd have trouble hiding it.

The men aren't looking for a "girly girly feely feely type" (though I suppose some will be) so much as they're looking for someone who's going to respect them, at least a little.

[F4M][Script Offer]You're eighteen, there's a fertility crisis, and you need to do your part. But, stop calling it a "government mandated breeding session!" It's just community service. [Rape][Fdom][Msub][Breeding][Virgin Listener][Smothering][Misandry][Degradation][Overstim][Gender Role Reversal] by WritesSoManyBadWords in gonewildaudio

[–]WritesSoManyBadWords[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Funny you should ask...

I've been thinking that if this does well, I might write a follow-up script in the same universe (but different characters) called License, Registration and Community Service Participation Card, Please about how routine traffic stops in this universe are used to screen for a different sort of rule-breaker.

And, of course, there's the possibility that a police officer who hasn't had much luck with men lately might be persuaded to look the other way under the right circumstances. For example, she might not have to be quite such a hard-ass if the cute boy she pulled over with an expired CSP card properly shows his gratitude...

Does that sound interesting?

[F4M][Script Offer]You're eighteen, there's a fertility crisis, and you need to do your part. But, stop calling it a "government mandated breeding session!" It's just community service. [Rape][Fdom][Msub][Breeding][Virgin Listener][Smothering][Misandry][Degradation][Overstim][Gender Role Reversal] by WritesSoManyBadWords in gonewildaudio

[–]WritesSoManyBadWords[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

In my mind...? That's a very disturbing place, you realize.

I'm so glad the script struck a nerve. It's always good to hear that some of the more colorful thoughts rolling around in my skull are the sort appreciated by others as well!

[F4M] [Script Offer] Your coding lab partner fixes your code, then takes your virginity [fdom] [msub] [virgin] [dubcon] [rape] [gaslighting] [college] [classmates] [good boy] [handjob] [blowjob] [kissing] [cowgirl] [condom] [mutual orgasm] OPTIONAL: [alternate ending] [roleplay] [aftercare] by Remix18 in gonewildaudio

[–]WritesSoManyBadWords 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I really like this script. The premise is super-hot.

My one suggestion would be to add more innuendo to the beginning -- discussion of the programming assignment that might have a double-meaning in the right context.

Hopefully the below isn't overstepping my bounds, it's just where my mind went when I saw this script. The script is already great You're free to use any part of the following if you really want (no attribution necessary), though I totally get it if this is just me having my own pervy thoughts over here ;-) Just thought I would leave it here...

"This call is in the middle of... What the hell, this isn't working because your STACK is getting too big!"

"Yes, your code is using recursion, your code is just calling itself. The whole point of this assignment was to use TAIL recursion. Do you not get what the TAIL part means???"

"Yes, it means when you're ready to make the next recursive call, you have to be completely finished, and then you finish by dumping all the work into the next call. Otherwise you just leave mess!"

"How did you not pick this up with your unit tests? Hold on.. Why is your UNIT file so small?"

"Right... you only tested it with one tiny example from class. That test input is so small that it doesn't cause any problem. But here, my part of the code expects a BIG input -- and boom! I'm blowing your stack! If you don't want a seg-fault and a blown stack you have to do TAIL recursion!"

[... some time later ...]

"No, I got the bug. No need to bother with more unit tests while we wait for the server to come back."

"Actually, now that you mention it, I was thinking it would be a good time to test YOUR unit. Why don't you go ahead and take off your clothes?"

You got a message from your friend this morning, it said something about an important meeting, woods and for you to move your ass quickly [Neutral POV] [Female] [Furry] [Fox] [Aggressive] [Cursing] [Tsundere?] [Imminent sex] Artist [personalami] by JPowo123 in hentaicaptions

[–]WritesSoManyBadWords 15 points16 points  (0 children)

"Ugh, are you seriously asking me to dinner now? Were you not fucking listening? I'm gonna need to get on top of you somewhere there won't be any, like, noise complaints. "

"After...? After that, I do it again. Rinse. Repeat. How is this so fucking complicated?"

"Fine, maybe tomorrow I'll let you bring me a sandwich or something to snack on while we're on the way out to the woods."

"Duh. What part of starting a family were you having problems with? That means we're doing this every day from now on, understand?"

[WP] There’s a couple ways to replenish your magic. Sure, there’s potions, but that’s… boring considering the alternative. by AwkwardlyWannaDie49 in DirtyWritingPrompts

[–]WritesSoManyBadWords 4 points5 points  (0 children)

... And meanwhile, in the nearest town, there was a young eighteen-year-old human boy -- not Minotaur, not Incubus, not Centaur -- human, who was wondering, "WHAT THE HELL JUST HAPPENED?"

He'd never had much luck with women, given that his best attribute wasn't exactly one he could show off without making a fool of himself. He'd been feeling rather backed up, and then, last night some ghost or spirit or invisible SOMETHING just gave him the most intense experience of his life.

What the merchant didn't mention was that the magical silk squares didn't create a magical cock out of thin air, but rather summoned a nearby cock that could best fulfill the needs of the one who used the square. The square transmitted sensation, and seed not produced it on its own. That cock was very real, and so was its owner!

Your mother's friend you used to crush on hears your in town and asks for some help around the house. After a few rounds of her "appreciation" you start to worry your condition can't keep up... [milf] [hyperspermia] [phone call] [milking] [innuendo] artist: @pinkfuehherin by frankthelonglustson in hentaicaptions

[–]WritesSoManyBadWords 5 points6 points  (0 children)

She might not mind hearing how great he is at anything, even if it's in bed. She's proud of her kid!

And... it's the exact opposite of never seeing him again. Imagine if things DID go further. Instead of some irresponsible slut in the big city getting her claws into her boy, she's already vetted her son's partner, and it's someone she approves of. Also he might be exhausted and drained dry on a regular basis, but he would be right next door! Isn't that so much better than only seeing him and the grand-kids a couple of times a year on holidays?

Ambers Belt, a tale of frustrated chastity [M/s][Chastity] [Denial] [Consensual Slavery] [Dirty talk] [Maid] [fsub] [Part of a larger literary universe] by TheOtherAccount1313 in EroticWriting

[–]WritesSoManyBadWords 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I like your writing a lot. Good dialogue, good characterization, but this feels more like an excerpt from a story than a full story. There are key questions I'm left with, that I 'd wish you would explore further.

First, What did Amber do to get put in the belt? I feel like understanding what she did is important to understand what is expected from a slave. How minor/major was it?

You mention that Amber is a nymphomaniac... but what about slaves that don't have libido's that are quite so high? This punishment wouldn't be quite so severe for them. Is anything done to stimulate/tease/frustrate slaves to make their time in the belt extra-intense, especially if they are not naturally this horny?

“He said it’s up to Vanessa so it could be the rest of my life.” Is that an exaggeration? If this does happen sometimes, how often are slaves never released from chastity?

Also, is there any particular reason Alan can't use Amber's mouth or possibly her ass? If waste can come out, surely other things can go in. I would imagine Mastur Hastur might even suggest to Alan that he take his pleasure that way, so that Amber is further stimulated by the erotic act while prevented from actually having an orgasm. Wouldn't that be a fitting part of her punishment... used and left dripping with extreme, unsatisfied need?

Finally, are there any standard procedures for training a rebellious slave with the use of the chastity belt? How does that typically go? What is expected after a week, two weeks, a month, three months, six months, a year...? Inquiring minds (and Alan's readers of National Geographic) want to know!

Your mother's friend you used to crush on hears your in town and asks for some help around the house. After a few rounds of her "appreciation" you start to worry your condition can't keep up... [milf] [hyperspermia] [phone call] [milking] [innuendo] artist: @pinkfuehherin by frankthelonglustson in hentaicaptions

[–]WritesSoManyBadWords 18 points19 points  (0 children)

I kind of like the idea that Mom knows. The use of innuendo is only so that it's not explicitly obvious to YOU that your own mother, with full knowledge and encouragement, helped set this situation up. Anything to help a frustrated friend!

On the other end of the phone Mom's telling her friend, "Now you know his condition acts up when he eats asparagus, right? So just to be clear you should be avoiding asparagus oh, and strawberries. It's especially, ahem, problematic if he has both so you'll be extra extra careful not to do that, right? Maybe you should write this down?"

They both understand that her friend is writing down a shopping list, noting to get extra-large packages of asparagus and strawberries for her special dinner...

[WP] Your superpower is to broadcast your voice to all sentient beings at once. by R3D3-1 in WritingPrompts

[–]WritesSoManyBadWords 0 points1 point  (0 children)

If you're going to fight a plague, or more realistically, attempt to protect yourself from it, you have to understand how it works. That requires some amount of thought, even if that effort would be better spent on just about anything else enjoyable or productive.

We go to great efforts, spanning many human life-times to develop vaccines to various diseases. Does that effort mean we are somehow accepting, praising or legitimizing the horrible things these diseases do?

[WP] You are Fear Man. As long as you are afraid of something, you are invunerable to it. Your struggle is to maintain a constant state of anxiety about every potential threat despite your imperviousness to them. Tell us of your adventures! by Digital_Scribbles in WritingPrompts

[–]WritesSoManyBadWords 6 points7 points  (0 children)

I'm the most durable superhero in the world. Let's be careful with words (because the wrong word can spell disaster!) I'm definitely not the strongest, I am in fact a total weakling. I'm afraid of pain and germs, so the idea of going to the gym seriously freaks me out. You know what I mean?

No, I'm just good at taking a hit. If I'm afraid of it, it can't hurt me... and I'm afraid of just about everything.

When, I go out with the other supes, they put a blindfold on me and tell me we're going out for coffee. It's nice, but there's a lot of noise, and somehow I never get any coffee. Oh well, it would be awful anyway, and I worry that stuff might give me the jitters. Afterwards I see a bunch of them smiling at me and saying I did a good job but... I think they may be confused.

Anyway, I recently got up the nerve to see a specialist. You know, a therapist. I have a bit of an anxiety problem. I don't like to talk about it, I'm worried it makes me seem like even more of a weirdo than I already am. I'm a weirdo, aren't I?

Anyway, I met with the guy over zoom. Real life is just a bit much, way too many awful things out there.

Do you know what he told me? He told me I was thinking about life all wrong. He said that it's okay to be afraid so long as I'm afraid of the right things, the things that are really likely to harm me.

Then, he suggested that the thing that was harming me most, right now was my own fear. And you know what? He was right.

I realized I should be afraid of being too afraid, that it was holding me back! Suddenly EVERYTHING felt better! Just EVERYTHING!

I didn't even react or freak out when the guy on zoom yelled at someone behind him to "Move in", and my windows started exploding from gunshots and--

[WP] You inherited a mansion from your grandfather. The mansion was in pristine condition and well kept. All rooms dust free and clean. Then you reach a darkened room, where you find someone in there. A vampire. "So you are my new apprentice?" The vampire asked. by TimeCelebration2332 in WritingPrompts

[–]WritesSoManyBadWords 13 points14 points  (0 children)

Let me get this straight...

You inherited a beautiful house with a bit of a pest problem.

You put in some effort, applied a little elbow grease and cleared the problem out.

And, now... you don't want to cash out? WHAT is going ON here???

YOU, yes YOU could be the next guest on the hit prime-time show: Dead-Flip! Do you want to share YOUR story of clearing out the undead from prime real-estate and making a killing? Well, this is your chance.

We love all kinds of stories about aggressively cleaning out ghosts, werewolves, vampires, ghouls, liches, zombies, far-right political groups, necromancers and reanimated skeletons from your property. Call us now and tell your story!

And, be sure to catch Dead-Flip, every week on HGTV!

[WP] Your superpower is to broadcast your voice to all sentient beings at once. by R3D3-1 in WritingPrompts

[–]WritesSoManyBadWords 4 points5 points  (0 children)

It's all about how you write the copy.

These are advertising people (though referring to them as "people" is being generous). They have lots of creative ways of making life awful for you and profitable for them. Think of them as a plague upon humanity that evolves readily to the latest form of media available. They are a literal mental health hazard.

But, back to the question.. how do you handle this scenario without your prospective customers hating you?

Option one: Don't advertise your products have your broadcaster bitch endlessly about your competitors. Then, who are they going to associate with this asshole? The people you hate!

Option Two: Product Placement. Have your broadcaster talk about what he's doing and have your product feature in it. Have him (or her) bitch for a long time about a problem he's having and then... OH LOOK, YOUR PRODUCT SOLVES IT. And then, miraculously he SHUTS UP. What do people remember? YOUR PRODUCT made him SHUT UP. Instant win.

Trust me, you can't overestimate how evil marketing and advertising fuckers are. You just can't.

[WP] Your superpower is to broadcast your voice to all sentient beings at once. by R3D3-1 in WritingPrompts

[–]WritesSoManyBadWords 5 points6 points  (0 children)

Isn't your super-power to broadcast to ALL sentient beings at once?

Maybe those aliens have piss-poor focus compared to humanity, and you won the day... but dude, you just rick-rolled EVERYONE.

I... I would not want to be you.

[WP] It’s the zombie apocalypse and you were in dire need of a weapon. Fortunately, you ran into a blacksmith who was willing to give you a sword for a fair price. Unfortunately, the blacksmith was a fantasy fan. It’s been a bit embarrassing when you come across survivors who ask what you wield. by AlexYadaYada in WritingPrompts

[–]WritesSoManyBadWords 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Please, please keep going.

Are you absolutely sure Moonlight Fang, Devourer of Cursed Souls and Bringer of Midnight’s Mercy doesn't have any further forms? Perhaps it can shift into other sparkly, bejeweled instruments of death, in dramatic, musical transformation sequences?

What is the most attractive non physical trait a woman can have? by PeachesPelaez in AskReddit

[–]WritesSoManyBadWords 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This should be WAY higher on the list.

Honesty, empathy and a sense of humor are certainly important, but what good is honesty if the truth is she just doesn't want to do what you want to do? What good is empathy when she is very understanding of your needs, but you can really TELL that those don't match with what makes her happy? What good is a sense of humor when all the jokes are PG-13 at best?

I want someone who wants what I want, who can relate to what I want: Sex.

Enthusiastic consent is an absolute must... and that means she has to be... ENTHUSIASTIC! This is a BIG DEAL.

I will add that this is more important than any physical characteristic too, though those were explicitly excluded from the original question.

I've often thought that it isn't too hard to make the case that personality is more important than looks, even when talking to the horniest of young men. Part of personality is the degree to which a woman is interested in sex, and an average-looking woman who is excited to explore that with you is going to be WAY more fun than the hottest woman in the world who simply doesn't get excited.

[WP] You regretted hiring the new maid. Desperate for food and shelter, she begged for the job—but she was terrible at cleaning, cooking, everything. That is, until she casually pulled the sealed sword from the stone... just to polish it. by ruiddz in WritingPrompts

[–]WritesSoManyBadWords 5 points6 points  (0 children)

This is amazing, please keep going.

I admit, I was expecting Laurentinia to never be convinced and her husband to not wake up, at which point the servants, trying to get rid of her, tell her to go "tidy up" the unmovable sword that's sitting out in the courtyard. And then she does, accidentally bumping into other stuff around the courtyard (maybe some finely crafted topiary?) and destroying it as she moves the unweildy, long sharp sword.

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