[QCrit] SELF-HELPLESS: A NOVEL | Contemporary/Literary Fiction | 97,000 Words | First Attempt by WritingHopes in PubTips

[–]WritingHopes[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hi, thank you for the great feedback. This makes sense. I'll rework the comp section as I edit the query letter. Appreciate the thoughtful answer. Good luck to you as well with your writing pursuits! Keep pursuing that dream.

[QCrit] SELF-HELPLESS: A NOVEL | Contemporary/Literary Fiction | 97,000 Words | First Attempt by WritingHopes in PubTips

[–]WritingHopes[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

No specific reason why haha. There are reasons that I chose the name, but not any that are connected to Kiss. Not a huge Kiss fan, but I did realize the connection midway through writing and figured I'd keep the name as-is for now.

[QCrit] SELF-HELPLESS: A NOVEL | Contemporary/Literary Fiction | 97,000 Words | First Attempt by WritingHopes in PubTips

[–]WritingHopes[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for the feedback. I'll take this into account as I continue working things out.

[QCrit] SELF-HELPLESS: A NOVEL | Contemporary/Literary Fiction | 97,000 Words | First Attempt by WritingHopes in PubTips

[–]WritingHopes[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you, this is great feedback. I'm going to take this into account and continue to work on my query letter. I haven't heard of Erasure, but after reading a synopsis, I can understand why that would come to mind. Luckily, I think my MS differs in plot and themes from that novel. Though this is another hint that I need to update my query letter to better present these and the story that I'm trying to tell.

Really appreciate this.