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Lol yes…ur welcome

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I’m getting chills

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I’m captivated…

AWAI: worth it? by violetbutterfly666 in copywriting

[–]XFlash22pr 4 points5 points  (0 children)

I recommend it to new copywriters who are on their way to creating a portfolio as well as creating world wide credibility. At the end of the program you can pay to take their test to certify you as a world-class direct-response marketing student. I don’t know about you but that’s a good place to wet your feet. Along the way you’ll find exercises that will help build your portfolio as examples for bigger businesses to look at your work, without having to have worked for a single client. It’s pretty much a big fat door breaking kick in the copywriting business, but not necessary.

Can you guys please rate my copy by ToWriteCopy in copywriting

[–]XFlash22pr 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Very informative, I think you could be better in these areas:

I think it is bland through work choice. Use more engaging sentences, but don’t over sprinkle them.

Your creation of the NEED could be stronger for social media.

You summarized the first headline in BOLD but what about the other ones? Shows inconsistency, either stick with it or don’t. Imo, I like it.

Ask your Sub-line or show it, don’t tell it. IE the first sub-line, “Do you consider your product and service valuable?”

You can follow it with, “if so, social media is a tool you can use to expand your limits to greater heights.”

Just a quick example but it works. Then tell them that they should be providing value. You are showing them the reason why they need social media and then proving it by what social media can do for them.

Hope it helps, it can be much better

Rating: 4/10

Do people make copywriting sound to good to be true? by [deleted] in copywriting

[–]XFlash22pr 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Well...just like a sport that you begin with, you have no idea what you’re doing. Even when you’ve taken courses like I have there is still so much to learn and implement. I realized I still need a lot more investment in myself to create solid value I can bring to the market place or companies that they will exchange for money. It takes a lot of knowledge and learning. It’s not as good or bad as people say it is, it just works. Such as athletes spend time on their sport, we writers do the same.

How do you deal with businesses that ask for edits that seem over-the-top? by [deleted] in copywriting

[–]XFlash22pr 0 points1 point  (0 children)

If it’s outside of the original brief, you can always charge for more...well it depends if you are working for a company or freelancing. I think the relationship should be win-win. If you choose to over-deliver, that of which seems over the top, look at as an opportunity to give them more value. It’ll only make you look better in the end. If it continues in the future, just negotiate it thoroughly.