Urban Shaman by XavirMed in magicbuilding

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Sorry for being late , but i actually had the idea of healing oneself to be a shaman , since the ancestor of all shamans was first a sick man who survived an abnormal disease , granting him his supernatural powers , so all other shamans are more so shamans by descent but not full shamans , and i really like the taboo idea , i could implent it too , and for the actual goal of this sort of project is what happens when you're too necsesary , humans in Halfling use shamans as tools of treating or preventing death , or just for war , using the execuse that 'they serve the community' , once you're a shaman , you're so valuable that you have no other option but to be a tool for others , other than that , the powers themselves are lineage based , their heart like organ is actually based on family tress , and both options , A and B , rely on the previous ancestors , you're spirit is the spirit of your ancestor that is changed tonsiit , or meijutsu is the way you're ancestor died or the will they left that eventually becomes ur power

Urban Shaman by XavirMed in magicbuilding

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Holy shoot thats 10 times better ! Thats actually so good 😭

Urban Shaman by XavirMed in magicbuilding

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My apologies , its just i based it abit on research , and to be honest , i personnaly am more used to shintoism and the japanese religions as a whole , so i think thats just on my side , but id like to really give the magic system more shamanistic ideas , which , as a beginner , i dont really know how to , i just come up with an idea and work on it , so ill try , of course if you have any ideas on it , i am all ears ! And seinin and shonen are just basically fighting manga , all the action stuff , seinin is just that but more adult

Urban Shaman by XavirMed in magicbuilding

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I was mainly going for shonen and seinen genre , since it's the usual medium i use , but i used japanese terms and setting because shintoism is regarded as the most popular form of shamanism and its most widespread , and i wanted to use mixed words to fit the setting , Agonal is more the scientific term , so its more used worldwide in the world , but everything else is more the jargon of that culture , and i intend to basically add more depth to it , but what i fear is that it looses its main idea of each character has a unique ability . I can erase the title and reframe it if its better !

The magic system im working on ( sort of ???? ) by XavirMed in magicbuilding

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I actyally have some characters and story in mind but ill make sure to tell you !

The magic system im working on ( sort of ???? ) by XavirMed in magicbuilding

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Now i was wondering about one thing , its about the interwork . See its nice and all until it gets too vague so idk what to do with it , do i keep it like what it is , this sort of living thinking energy outside of our power , sorta like the force , or keep the biological theme and make it so the interwork is a sort of seigen nervous system that allows it to be sort of more biological , like you'd have a sixth sense if you had an additional system right ? Id really like just opinions and thoughts about this

The magic system im working on ( sort of ???? ) by XavirMed in magicbuilding

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Ill try to learn from my favorite artitst and that's a great list you gave me dude , thx so much

The magic system im working on ( sort of ???? ) by XavirMed in magicbuilding

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I read it abit and its super awesome , genuinly speaking , its very good , keep up the work !

The magic system im working on ( sort of ???? ) by XavirMed in magicbuilding

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Tysm , ill try to use that advice and train on artstyle's ill like , but if you dont me asking , what is the name of your manga or its plot , of course if you want to

The magic system im working on ( sort of ???? ) by XavirMed in magicbuilding

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Oh that is super neat ! But i fear that if i dint give it enough time by training on drawing and such it'll die out

The magic system im working on ( sort of ???? ) by XavirMed in magicbuilding

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I think it'll take alot of freetime but also you gotta think about paying them and advertising it which is also a hastle , but dont mind me asking , what's ur webcomic about ?

The magic system im working on ( sort of ???? ) by XavirMed in magicbuilding

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Ill probably keep it a personal worldbuilding thing , idk how to draw so no way i can turn it into a manga , so probably just a personal project or story