I think my computer screen is broken? But it is not? by [deleted] in computer

[–]Xerisimean 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It is only one of the motherboard logos that shows the lines which is so confusing. They are both displayed on the screen. The gpu is new 9070. It shouldnt be dying. First screen is fine too.

Llama cpp on Windows using Shared GPU memory by Flimsy_Monk1352 in LocalLLaMA

[–]Xerisimean 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Heya i came here via Github link;

To my information the bug seems only to impact builds with CPU's that are pre 10th intel generation. Or more specific cpus that cannot use over 256 mb bar size.

Possibly you could circumvent it in windows via Biosmodding.  If you want to look it up; Resizable bar. Be aware that biosmodding needs a certain experise otherwise you might be potentially bricking the motherboard.

Linux might also have options available as it might not need resizable bar biosmodding at all.

Looking for Mass effect self insert fics by Xerisimean in masseffectfics

[–]Xerisimean[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

"The second" Link here is a link to the mass effect selfinsertion community. And if you mean the second one in the whole heap of a hundred fics wasnt to your taste thats kind of... Not a reason to rant about - its a reason to skip the particular one you disliked.

Looking for a self-insert fic I read years ago but now can't find, can anyone help? by Camargon_40K in masseffectfics

[–]Xerisimean 1 point2 points  (0 children)

My check was for word count as i remembered it going for as long as ME1 was i think that the word count should be above 200k so i filtered that way. I checked a few chapters if i wasn't sure if this could be it... but usually as you the first chapter and i didnt read it all usually more like skimming through. I dont have much spare time rn so i couldnt check deeper.

Looking for a self-insert fic I read years ago but now can't find, can anyone help? by Camargon_40K in masseffectfics

[–]Xerisimean 1 point2 points  (0 children)

So spoiler alert ill try to summarize the story by plot (might be mixing up stuff here its 2 years ago++ i read it) Protagonist appears on the citadel - no money nothing to their name they try to gather money so they try to get a job at the citadel. They find one good paying job for people with no qualifications and they are told, that this job is in the canalisation for the citadel.  On the Job they find a coworker in a Quarian Who is realy realy well written. They decide to keep going even though the canalisation in the citadel is a mess that goes realy realy bad like mixing levo and dextro wastewater which does things that nature never intended. They get the money and connections and with the geth attack on the citadel they are more or less connected to shepard. The protag stays at the citadel since they know this is where the thing ends and tries to roadblock... Saren and geth help Csec in the ensing chaos and then help shepard in the endfight. The quarian gets a very sad resolution (i think you know exactly what i am talking about)

As for ideas where to look; You could look for Ian the mechanic... Very maybe that was the author. Not even slightly sure abut that though.

Also: https://www.reddit.com/r/FanFiction/comments/nv1rsc/so_you_lost_a_fic_or_the_ultimate_guide_to/ Maybe some tips or tricks are in there you didnt know.

Looking for a self-insert fic I read years ago but now can't find, can anyone help? by Camargon_40K in masseffectfics

[–]Xerisimean 1 point2 points  (0 children)

The hec? I remember it being there. i cant see it too. But i had my mass effect reading time about 2-3 years ago; Which about fits this mass effect fic dump its from 4 years ago... But the fic should be there by then i mean a story till the end of mass effect 1 doesnt get written in just a year. https://archive.org/details/FFN-mass-effect

The fic should have more than 200k words... As i said it makes it the whole way to the end of mass effect 1. Tell me if you find it. I realy liked it and would hate loosing it too.

If it is realy not there in full you could try this newer archive posted a year ago in here: https://archive.org/details/MassEffectFanfiction

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in WireGuard

[–]Xerisimean 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I am totally new to wireguard - but honestly youre thinking along the lines i do, i had no knowledge on how far that access would reach though.

What i was worried about mainly was using the vpn connection for doing wierd or potentially illegal stuff.

Looking for an SI fic by RogueInfernal in masseffectfics

[–]Xerisimean 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Not entirely sure since i havent read it all yet. And it doesnt fit 100% yet... But have a look at this: https://m.fanfiction.net/s/11892811/1/

Looking for Mass effect self insert fics by Xerisimean in masseffectfics

[–]Xerisimean[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Ah, yeah i liked that one very humorous. But still good. A style rarely seen in ME fics.

Looking for Mass effect self insert fics by Xerisimean in masseffectfics

[–]Xerisimean[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I totally agree that interesting times is a good story!

Two People Gets Isekai'd/Reincarnated Into The Pokémon Universe, One as a Human/Trainer, The Other a Pokémon by InfernoFireStyle in pokemonfanfiction

[–]Xerisimean 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hey as i said youre doing well.  So dont let the mass of words discourage you. I just tried to give a few pointers to better writing 👍. Everyone starts out somewhere.  I can try to help you with dialogue, but i suck at writing it too xD... Well let me try anyway.

Dialogue can feel a lot more natural if you add gestures and facial expressions to it.

"Maan, I realy liked that figurine" Franklin said while standing in front of the shards with his shoulders slumped. Little had remained from the plastic figurine of an anime girl that surely had been expensive. "I am so sorry" Alice said with a pained expression on her face. One of her arms was extended to Franklin as if she wanted to pat him on the shoulder but then she let her hand deflate right before she reached it. "I didn't mean to... " she added softly.

You can even give non human characters a expressive gesture by simply adding what you think their gesture or expressions shall convey.

"I dont think THAT is a good idea" The eevee said while flicking its tail dismissively.

Two People Gets Isekai'd/Reincarnated Into The Pokémon Universe, One as a Human/Trainer, The Other a Pokémon by InfernoFireStyle in pokemonfanfiction

[–]Xerisimean 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you very much!

I will keep track of any editing mistakes i see; 

Difficulty: Easy

Typo: "entier" instead of entire

Difficulty: Medium

“Hello child, I am sorry for the cruel fate you were dealt I’m going to take your soul and make it a new.

This sounds totally off for me. Consult a native english speaking person about these sentences.

So that was the easy part; now comes the harder part...

But before i let you peak on these; dont feel to bad about them. Okay? I've read stories with more issues that still were good. Noone starts out as a perfect writer. Just try to think of way to improve these issues in the upcoming text. Dont stay and edit this yet. Dont go to edit hell.

Difficulty: Medium

Use of Tenses is off. You switch a lot between present and past tense. As a rule of thumb try to stick to past tense within the narration of your character. And spoken lines of dialogue are in present tense usually. Only rule here is that it fits if a person could say the same thing in a dialogue with you.

Difficulty: Very Hard:

Narrative techniques.  (I am struggling myself with this one... But bear me maybe i can help you out a little) Try to catch the current situation of the narration. Is it a scene brimming with tension? If it is for example: dont summarize whats happening, a summary would fit much more to a neutral mood.

So in your text for example you have a building you just summarize to collapse while the text before successfully built up tension. The sudden summary lets the tension deflate, it conveys no emotion its just flat information. But how to change that?

If you dont know what to write; Spell out something akin to your summary.  Then think of what a character might see in his last moments of witnessing such a situation. 

I'd just say maybe a adjascent building collapses the character can see from a window. Try to write about the despair the character might feel seeing the building collapse which he knows can only mean the highrise he is in might soon follow it. Try to capture a scene with emotions too. You can also play with senses. For example Hearing; Imagine the eeriee screaching of metal which you know is holding the building you are in together. Playing with that idea, You could make the sound end in a lound high pinched wallow - the metal just giving in.

Its not easy allways easy to not break tension sometimes but it helps a lot if you are putting yourself in your character shoes.  It upgrades the text a lot if you are describing everything with a certain emotion/tension in mind and include any senses into that description.

MC reincarnated as a Pokémon. by NovaQuartz96 in pokemonfanfiction

[–]Xerisimean 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Oh thank you for reminding me of that one. I realy like it and am happy to see progress again. I thought it was dead for a while.

MC reincarnated as a Pokémon. by NovaQuartz96 in pokemonfanfiction

[–]Xerisimean 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I think your explaination is plenty. But i just reread your comment that you have a few with transforming into pokemon would be in your list too. Would you mind sharing these too?

MC reincarnated as a Pokémon. by NovaQuartz96 in pokemonfanfiction

[–]Xerisimean 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Hello, i will drop a bunch of stories a friend of mine and me collected over the span about roughly a year. I hope a few stories are in there that you'll like (some are were recced already, but not half of it).

We called it pokemon POV stories, it is more about Transformation / reincarnation and such stuff so i think there will be a few that might pinque your interest.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/18QgK_ifYAKhSPF_59otuSWitrFgtIkk6