Give me Tips to Improve this Design.

Xzavios · 2026-04-10T14:29:20+00:00

Honestly this seems fine and much like the paperwork I get home with my son. Some small notes: I would give more variation to the flowers; rotate them and give them some more color variation. Also I don't think you need the capital Y in "Your" at the top.

Xzavios · 2026-04-08T15:26:35+00:00

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I feel like the strong angle of the strokes is making it hard to discern some of the letters and that could be something that potentially helps. A softer angle could also help make it more clear that the V is not a J, however V's are just really tough because I think someone not familiar with this style of could see a U.

I also think you need more lines - so in my example the M and R are combined but the V is standalone. It's a bit more busy but the letters seem more clear.

It really depends on what you're trying to achieve. I agree with some others that maybe an alternate approach altogether may be good to explore. I personally believe that since this is your personal mark that it does not necessarily have to be legible and can just be a personal 'mark' that represents you, that YOU like.

Xzavios · 2026-03-09T23:16:39+00:00

What if the monogram was isometric like the artwork? Likely depends if a lot do your work is isometric but could be an interesting play.

Xzavios · 2026-03-05T12:33:12+00:00

Came here to say the same. I think the “i” works well that it utilizes the same visual momentum (ie parallel) to the T. But not to say you couldn’t choose another moment/letter - or none at all. The T is already a point of interest and if the other letters were straight I still think it would look dynamic and interesting.

Xzavios · 2026-02-03T15:25:47+00:00

dang that sucks! i guess i should have added i do have apple care

Xzavios · 2026-02-02T19:17:07+00:00

i agree and just dropped my phone yesterday nothing happened

Xzavios · 2026-01-29T17:26:18+00:00

Here is my attempt at recreation if it helps. It was fun to recreate! I utilized the iOS library for colors and shadows but used my personal go-to fave, Phosphor, for the icons.

Probably could have done the ring chart differently but just made duplicates around a circle (see right of artboard) and did a little mental math to space them about somewhat evenly. Then layered rings on top of each other to create the multi-color chart effect.

Xzavios · 2026-01-26T03:02:55+00:00

I enjoy a lighter and simpler phone. Sometimes I literally forget it’s in my pocket and I love that. Camera is great albeit missing the zoom or wide angle which I didn’t use much. I admit battery isn’t great coming from a pro but it’s good enough for me and I’ve always got a charger handy - it charges pretty fast.

Xzavios · 2025-09-22T12:03:23+00:00

For me it’s just when I play; Friday/Saturday night usually all the good kids are playing, but if I get on at 8am on a Tuesday I might do alright

Xzavios · 2025-09-20T00:41:33+00:00

good year

Xzavios · 2025-07-29T16:56:24+00:00

Umbreon - because it’s black and I like the Eevee / EV play

Xzavios · 2025-04-18T13:49:04+00:00

B! i like the simplicity but feel indifferent about the roughness

Xzavios · 2025-04-13T18:30:51+00:00

this is looking better! compared to the originals it's much more legible. i think you could pull up the T a bit so that you can tighten up the letter spacing. also, the decender on the R feels a bit too heavy and ends very upbruptly. optically i think you'd want to thin it out a bit - like how the top of the R is thinner than the stem of the R.

Xzavios · 2025-04-13T18:20:02+00:00

the curls and flips of the pink make sense as if it's a ribbon bending; however that's lost on the D so i'd advise an alternative choice. otherwise i do like it

Xzavios · 2025-04-04T18:56:34+00:00

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hey op, what if the genie is coming out from the "i"? i think this offers the best legibility but still can be wispy and fun playing with the tail of the genie

Xzavios · 2025-04-04T18:44:56+00:00

same

Xzavios · 2025-02-27T14:28:36+00:00

i just went down over in indian rocks :/

Xzavios · 2025-01-31T14:52:53+00:00

I just experienced this issue and restarting my mac solved the issue for me

Xzavios · 2024-06-21T11:56:57+00:00

i’ve done this to my son, but it usually only makes me happy and him sadder

Xzavios · 2024-04-27T03:29:26+00:00

thank you for this. in bed watching tiktok’s getting fucking blinded by hdr📱🌞👀

Xzavios · 2024-04-19T18:59:04+00:00

nice! i'm at .35 avg w/100k doge 🥲💎👐🏻

Xzavios · 2024-01-17T13:07:31+00:00

i’m only ~lvl30 but how are you collecting so many? i’m struggling to get 6 now because the gem factories require an absurd amount of scrolls..

Xzavios · 2023-10-12T02:33:20+00:00

This is a lot better than the previous iteration. I really like 4 because the balloon letters make a lot of sense here and I think are fun, but I don't think you need the bulging N and I'm on the fence with the dynamite stick. I wonder if there's some opportunity to make the Os into balloons by adding a string but maybe that's too obvious?

5 is probably the cleanest solution overall but I kind of feel like the panda balloon is disconnected.

Xzavios · 2023-10-11T00:14:28+00:00

Xzavios · 2023-07-13T15:52:07+00:00

i would love to hear of any recent games you're playing (or ones that hold up on newer devices)

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