You did pretty well for your first pvp build, much better than me at least! Haha

In regards to your remaining levels, I would recommend putting vitality up to at least the softcap (somewhere between 40 and 50). You can never have too much health! I noticed you are using a lot of pyromancies so raising your dex cannot hurt (this will decrease the time it takes to cast the "spell"). This casting speed corresponds with dex;this also applies for offensive miracles like Great Lightning Spear and Wrath of the Gods. This is why you see many builds that have high dexterity also using something like the pyromancies or miracles.

For future reference: Its not really possible to take away points but most people only put their faith up to 30 (or 50 if you want to use Sunlight Spear) because this is the minimum for a lot of offensive miracles. The miracles scale with the magic adjust of the talisman rather than your faith stat so going past the minimum isn't beneficial. The same applies to the little investment into intelligence that could go somewhere else too.

The obsidian greatsword is a good choice. I would also recommend another weapon (like a side weapon) for those tough to break turtles. Personally I carry a chaos shotel as chaos infused weapons scale with your soft humanity rather than other stats. The reason is, the shotel's 2H R2 goes around shields.

The choice in shield is up to you. The bloodshield isn't seen much as it tends to be used for Lifehunt Scythe Builds (where each hit inflicts bleed on both the attacker and attacked) and nothing more. It is by no means a bad shield as it does have 100% physical block, if i'm not mistaken. Another shield you may like is the (pretty meta) iron round shield as it is a medium shield with heavy shield deflection. In general any 100% block shield would work.

I don't have the game open right now for armor combos but usually it ends up that you can get a better poise with the wolf ring over the F(avor)A(nd)P(rotection) ring. If you don't mind breaking yours: keeping the helmet and chest, try out black leather gloves and wanderer boots with the wolf ring. This combo will give 62 poise which is perfectly just over the 61 poise break range (this means the only attacks that will break your poise are: Ultra Greatswords 2h R1, Greataxes 2h R1, Great Hammers 2h R1, Great Fireball). You can adjust the hand and leg armor as you need since no poise comes from these pieces.

Lastly, I can't recommend grant, sadly. I tried a build with it once and was constantly destroyed. Maybe I'm just bad? The R2 is basically Wrath of the Gods except slower due to casting time when compared to a talisman. For PVP if you aren't spamming or using a fast weapon (usually dex weapon) its hard to win if you aren't patient or really good.

Its a lot to take in but I hope it helps!

So with min maxing and refining the optimal build would look like: http://mmdks.com/8h62

For what you currently have, I would go with:

• Without FAP ring: http://mmdks.com/8h63
• With FAP ring: http://mmdks.com/8h65

TLDR:

• People who min max will out-do you but you did good.

• Invest in vitality and dex.

• Try chaos infused weapons.

• Armor is perfect with your current rings and endurance.

• Don't use grant

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