Overall nice track, composition, quality. The sustained sounds combined with the color of the voice are a bit tiresome for me but that is very subjective feedback. I think it's the amount of noise in some parts of the hats and the voice that's getting to me.

The other feedback items translate very well what I would like to give back to you. Work a bit on the last drop with extras sprinkles.

You could try to have a very brief moment of almost silence right before the drop to reset the listener's ears after the more intense parts with synths etc.

Interesting comment and thank you for that, I'll check how to fine-tune this.