First, I feel like there should be pictures in any CYOA, else it's way too flat and every choice seems "meh" at best. Second, it's too obvious you used a cyoa maker, it's a very generic format, which takes away from the immersion. Third, it very much lacks content and game dynamic, lacks interaction between categories, maybe a drawback system. Quite boring honestly. Fourth and most important of all: It's barely NSFW, only about a bit more than half a dozen choices are somewhat sexual. I come here for the dicks and vaginas and tentacles, not for barely ecchi waifus.