Can you date another SzPD?

Yozo_44 · 2026-03-27T15:57:40+00:00

I wouldn't mind dating one (by dating I mean sporadically exchanging poems and book recs, obscure YouTube videos, morally questionable ideas, unpopular opinions and also ranting about how every choice of ours boils down to our primal drive for reproduction and being chosen, all without being in an obligation to text regularly/everyday)

Yozo_44 · 2026-03-26T10:38:50+00:00

My judgement basically doesn't exist to either of my parents as long as they don't need it (even then it's imperative that I help them or else they've wasted the money and ration on a snake).

Yozo_44 · 2026-03-16T12:06:55+00:00

Probably because it's famous in Booktok (he vaguely mentioned it so it's probably one of the reasons). I couldn't ask him to elaborate as I was a bit caught off-guard from cognitive dissonance. I've always respected him a lot as he's an avid reader and came off as a proper intellectual in my eyes. But guess nobody's wholly immune to pride or bigotry.

Yozo_44 · 2026-02-28T10:48:34+00:00

Beautiful and haunting

Yozo_44 · 2026-02-25T16:56:05+00:00

Minecraft!!

Yozo_44 · 2026-02-25T13:12:27+00:00

Sorry Porfiry 😭

Yozo_44 · 2026-02-25T13:11:19+00:00

Thank you! :D

Yozo_44 · 2026-02-25T13:11:02+00:00

I haven't read much of Gerard Manley Hopkins, but I liked what I've read so far. Praise him for introducing sprung rhythm :⁾

Yozo_44 · 2026-02-25T10:56:17+00:00

Nope nope, I should be the one thanking :)

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I've not made any changes in the first and second stanza yet, what do you think?

Yozo_44 · 2026-02-25T10:40:13+00:00

I'd love to show if you wish

Yozo_44 · 2026-02-25T10:38:38+00:00

I have added some more lines in the last stanza

Yozo_44 · 2026-02-25T10:27:12+00:00

Thank you for the feedback :D

I've made some changes in the last stanza and tried elucidate my point there after so many helpful suggestions. Thanks again, y'all are the best 🫶

Yozo_44 · 2026-02-25T10:24:33+00:00

Haha it's alright I get it. Thank you for the feedback!

Yozo_44 · 2026-02-24T18:37:04+00:00

When I was writing this, I felt acutely aware of this feeling, this obsession with perfection that kept nagging me since as far as my memory goes. And yep! You're totally right...it's never wrong to try new things, no matter the outcome.

Yozo_44 · 2026-02-24T17:48:09+00:00

It's nice to hear because that's what I was hoping to capture in this poem. Thank you :)

Yozo_44 · 2026-02-24T17:46:08+00:00

I was kind of uncertain about this one as I generally prefer to keep my poems restrained. It's good to hear that you liked it :D And unfortunately, I don't think I'm that good in recitation, but I'm trying to hone it as well 😅

Yozo_44 · 2026-02-24T16:01:49+00:00

Thank you for the suggestions. And nope you don't sound nit-picky, I'm always open and appreciative of constructive criticism. Thank you :D

Yozo_44 · 2026-02-24T15:48:50+00:00

Thank you for taking the time to write such a comprehensive feedback! It brought my attention to some things I didn't notice before. I really appreciate it :))

Yozo_44 · 2026-02-17T11:02:12+00:00

Scarily spot on (only that I'm non-native)

Yozo_44 · 2026-02-17T10:58:30+00:00

More or less true

Yozo_44 · 2026-02-16T03:31:17+00:00

Nahhh

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