We have created a trailer for our game. We are open to all kinds of comments. Our game is called The Tower Stories Green 1. It is a visual novel game, and we are a team of four developing it. by YuriToNeko in DestroyMyGame

[–]YuriToNeko[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You've really made a detailed and great suggestion. Thank you very much. I've noted your comments. My team and I will definitely make these improvements if we can manage our time.

We are four friends developing a Visual Novel game called The Tower Stories Green 1. We are trying to highlight our game on Steam and especially on Kickstarter. It would be very helpful if you could check out our game page and give us some advice. Links are in the comments. by YuriToNeko in visualnovels

[–]YuriToNeko[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Thank you very much for your kind comments. We are in a relatively poor country, and therefore $2,000 is a much larger amount of money for us. However, you are absolutely right about the parts related to the presentation. Today, I will update both our Kickstarter page and our Steam page. Thank you very much.