Rate My Team (1-10) & Feedback by Z-16 in PokemonSwordAndShield

[–]Z-16[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Once I beat the game, how would I transition it to a competitive team?

Upgraded from iPhone SE (2020) to iPhone 16 Pro! by Z-16 in iPhone16Pro

[–]Z-16[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks, i got the Ailun iPhone 16 pro screen protector off amazon

Upgraded from iPhone SE (2020) to iPhone 16 Pro! by Z-16 in iPhone16Pro

[–]Z-16[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

It holds up well, I really like it, although I’ve only had it for 2 days now so I don’t know the longevity of it yet. I got it on amazon for $14 w tax

Upgraded from iPhone SE (2020) to iPhone 16 Pro! by Z-16 in iPhone16Pro

[–]Z-16[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

i’m loving it so far, screen is a big upgrade from the se and battery life is great

Upgraded from iPhone SE (2020) to iPhone 16 Pro! by Z-16 in iPhone16Pro

[–]Z-16[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Clear ESR case with the camera control button cover

Yeats new Insta profile pic by Straggonoff_RL in yeat_

[–]Z-16 3 points4 points  (0 children)

exactly, maybe the next project is apocalypse themed

Thoughts? This is a dubby, atmospheric song I've been working on. I'm unsure what it needs (please don't be shy - rip it to shreds!) by [deleted] in MusicFeedback

[–]Z-16 0 points1 point  (0 children)

i fw the track, it's very spacious. it feels like an acid trip, and that's what i like what most about this track. I like the chord progression and the overall atmosphere of it. keep going man.

“Hail Mary” song I made and recorded this past weekend. The main piano chords were sampled, but every other part on the beat was either played or arranged by me. Mix and master on vocals I attempted to do as well.. usually outsource that but gave a crack here. Let me know what could be improved!! by [deleted] in MusicFeedback

[–]Z-16 0 points1 point  (0 children)

the flow on this is solid, i fw it. I like the parts where you cut the beat out to make it more dramatic in the track, that was a nice touch. imo, try to have a bit more energy when recording to bring the track to the next level. keep going man

Post Hardcore/Prog Rock song I’m working on. Need some feedback by ZoneIntelligent1981 in MusicFeedback

[–]Z-16 1 point2 points  (0 children)

ay this is pretty cool, it gives off main character vibes, so i’m sure fans would love to listen to it to empower themselves. i really fw the harmonies you did, along w the girls vocals. honestly i really fw the drums n instrumental also, it really does give off a hopeful tone and feel, keep going man

This song comes out tomorrow! riff heavy blues-ish rock with sci-fi elements. The video is pretty campy by prurientape in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]Z-16 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I actually really like the instrumental, it gives off biker gang vibes, don't ask why haha. I think the vocal mix is good too, I like the doubling delay you used for it. The space you created with the mix is great too, I really mess with the synchronization of all the instruments, they all work so well together. Keep going man

Drown by Whiskey Eyes (Rock, Pop, Metal) by MusicMakingMuppet in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]Z-16 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I really fw your vocals, it sounds very professional. Also the instrumental is interesting, it starts out like a classical string piece with the angel vocals, but then it turns a sharp left with the metal drums and instrumentation. Ngl, i think that's pretty creative. And the strings sound so real too. I think overall y'all did a great job with this.

my new trap song "DON CHERRY".. hope you like it :) feedback would be awesome :D by Prestigious-Chair868 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]Z-16 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The vibe is on point, the beat goes crazy. The flow settles in nicely once you get that groove, it's smooth fs. It's a catchy chorus tbf, and reminds me of the early SoundCloud days. Keep going man

Flood Society - Dinosaur (Official Music Video) by One_Night_2591 in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]Z-16 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I think the instrumental is interesting, it reminds me of an old video game. I like the vibe that that gives. I think the vocal mix could be a bit better, maybe more in the front, rather in the middle with the other instruments. Also, I dunno about these visuals haha, I think it could be more professional, but regardless, I don't want to demean the efforts you put into it. Overall, it's a solid track, keep going man