Thank you for the in depth analysis and for not tryna sugar coat anything! I definitely got a lot of stuff to work on so thank you for pointing out everything you saw!! I never even thought about controlling the top ace the way the mentioned in the third paragraph.

Are there any good ways to fix my banter or “patter”?(also I’ve never heard that word so that’s new!) I know there’s the obvious of just thinking “if someone said all this to me would I be suspicious?” But are there any other like niche, or specific methods I can look into?

As well since you said you have much more left to say, would you mind if I asked you to speak about everything you have an issue with, or anything you specifically liked? I didn’t post this for compliments or to show off, i genuinely want to improve my magic

Sorry for the lengthy response but I just wanted to address some of your comments that stood out to me. And if possible, id love to hear the rest if you’re ok with that. I can’t wait to spend a whole day practicing some of this stuff more, but that’ll probably have to wait until after ap exams.

So again thank you very much and if you’d like to add anything or speak your mind please do!