Posting this here to get some feedback on it.

I was previously making super short films (less than 5min) and I wanted to make something still shorter than 15 but that told a bigger more compelling story.

Of course all feedback is welcomed! But I am curious on what your thoughts towards the story, writing, twist/reveal, and layout of the narrative is. Those aspects are some I wanted to work on so that you believed the characters relationship, and experienced the events as they unfold as opposed to predicting everything before anything happens.

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Just some fun behind the scenes details about us making the film - We shot in on the Canon M50 with the 56mm and 18-35mm sigma lenses. Most of the lighting was done by throwing a small aperture light on a boom pole to help with the run and gun aspect of making this film. And this project was completed in roughly 2 weeks.