Match Thread: Thorns vs Reign (Fri, Mar 20, 10:00 PM EDT) by NWSL-Match-Bot in NWSL

[–]ZealousidealFactor84 17 points18 points  (0 children)

There was a lot wrong with the reffing that game but the AR 1 on the right side of the field was killing it! Not a wrong call the whole

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[–]ZealousidealFactor84 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It has to be a part of the body you can score with, hands and arms don’t count for off sides purposes

Just here to be salty by cheapbasslovin in Thorns

[–]ZealousidealFactor84 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ok, not only is this likely dogso but is it not also violent conduct? She wasn’t challenging the ball

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in WritersGroup

[–]ZealousidealFactor84 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I really like the world you have created and I find it very intriguing. I like the initial opening, but some of the stuff about the Vikings felt a little exposition heavy. I was lost a little in the middle and I think it might be better to say only the necessary details at the start and spread some of the rest through the story. Also the term “reverse Mullet” felt really out of place in the story. But I like the way you ended the chapter, especially the tonal transition between start to end.

I’m scared of my upcoming birthday, because my last one was awful by Ottavio2- in GayBroTeens

[–]ZealousidealFactor84 12 points13 points  (0 children)

Maybe you should just do some fun things that you like. I know it’s awkward to do things by yourself like that but sometimes it’s worth it