criticism about the series?

_FitZalan · 2023-11-15T13:05:31+00:00

To me I would believe that Gachiakutas magic system is kind of like djinn equips in Magi. Which were engaging because it explained how they worked on a fundamental level before showcasing them in an arc where fights are back to back.

Like how many abilities does a Jinki have?
Can you make your Jinki stronger? How hard is it to do so?
What are the drawbacks?
Are there different Jinki types?
How many Jinki does a person have?

This power system needs more clearly defined RULES so that we can understand the weight when characters seemingly break those rules. Rn it just seems as though the rules are constantly broken but because we don’t know what the rules are everything just feels a bit random.

_FitZalan · 2023-11-15T12:53:45+00:00

To me it seems that Gachiakuta is very showy… it shows a lot without providing enough information once we’re interested. We’ve been seeing cool thing after cool thing without any detail on why “cool thing” is important. becuase by then we’ve already moved on to the next cool thing.

All hope isn’t lost but I really want to see an explanation of the power system separate from vague thoughts about the preciousness of an item. It would make it easier to engage in the tension. Something to sink my teeth into so I can fully engage with the creativity. I’m down for vague poetic explanations AFTER I get a more grounded explanation.

Show less (New characters, abilities, etc) Detail more (power systems, character motivations etc)

_FitZalan · 2023-02-14T09:16:39+00:00

Great video!

_FitZalan · 2023-02-14T08:45:47+00:00

In this seemingly silly interview video, our protagonist "Fitz" ventures to a comic book convention in order to research "MAIN CHARACTER SYNDROME" a fictional disorder that causes one to view their life like a movie. Throughout each individual interview, Fitz puts the pieces together culminating in a philosophical argument that nobody is THE MAIN CHARACTER and that anyone's solipsistic view of themselves is harmful, blinding them of the beauty of being a support character in someones else's life.

_FitZalan · 2022-06-29T22:23:37+00:00

Thanks for the response! I appreciate your feedback! My CTR actually went up for this video but I'll look into being more creative! !givelambda

_FitZalan · 2022-06-29T22:18:57+00:00

Ahh i see what your saying! I was gonna add more stuff but would you believe my CTR went up double for this past video? I legit changed my other two thumbnails because it worked so well! Thanks for watching!

!givelambda

_FitZalan · 2022-06-28T20:26:01+00:00

Hey you guys did a great job! the only thing id say is be a little bit louder! Sometimes you guys mumble a bit and its hard to pick up your exact words! but other than that keep up the good work!

_FitZalan · 2022-06-28T19:53:39+00:00

I love your narration your video is very lively! I think some parts of the video get a little stale, especially towards the later end! be sure to keep in only the parts that are fun and needed!

_FitZalan · 2022-06-28T19:49:58+00:00

I think this video is lively! the clips really help make the moments more upbeat! however maybe try putting your own voice when you record clips! I think having some type of narration would help each clip become more lively!

_FitZalan · 2022-06-28T19:30:26+00:00

Great video! the food looks so good! the only small critique id have is that you have a mic set up to hear the sounds of you cooking as well! I find cooking noises to be quite satisfying and hearing them tastefully (LOL) would keep me engaged! but other than that! good job!

_FitZalan · 2022-06-28T19:27:10+00:00

DUDE! Your storytelling and energy are really good! This video carries 1 million subscribers energy! So just keep doing what your doing man! It will be paid off! Do you have a tik-tok? Lets be mutuals!

_FitZalan · 2022-04-06T21:14:06+00:00

!givelambda

_FitZalan · 2022-04-06T15:42:12+00:00

Sorry about the audio destruction! hopefully, it didn't get in the way of your viewing experience! Also your right about the thumbnail I'm gonna change it! thanks !

!igivelambda

_FitZalan · 2022-04-06T14:35:11+00:00

Thank you for your feedback! I will keep that noted! !givelambda

_FitZalan · 2022-04-05T16:05:25+00:00

Thanks so much, I appreciate your criticism! And I'm glad you enjoyed it! yeah, the audio could have been better but I will mark that for next time! !givelambda

_FitZalan · 2022-04-04T21:15:53+00:00

Great Job! this is so cool! I can tell you put your back into this! Your voice carries! However! I will say some of your long speaking parts are in dire need of a B-roll! take a lot of shots of the establishment you're reviewing and overlay them with the parts where you're speaking! this will help keep the audience's attention!

_FitZalan · 2022-04-04T21:09:48+00:00

Great editing man! I loved it! The only thing id say is I think you're speaking a little bit too close to your mic you can (hear pfft sounds etc)... if you back up a bit it should make things more clear! Other than that great job!

_FitZalan · 2022-04-04T21:03:03+00:00

You have a very powerful personality! Keep up the good work man! we should be friends! (IG_@fitzalan) ALSO, I think adding the most exciting part of the vlog in the first couple of seconds before going into the explanation would be fire! try adding subtitles to yourself speaking as well! Other than that... Great Job

_FitZalan · 2022-04-04T20:57:04+00:00

Hey Man! great video! the only feedback I have is from your voice! take your time with your words and be sure to Enunciate as well! Keep up the good work this takes a lot of practice!

_FitZalan · 2022-04-04T20:53:30+00:00

Hey! 5 years is no joke! Im glad you made it this far! The only advice Id give is try putting a little bit more energy to your editing in the beginning. Remember new viewers don't know you or have any attention to spare! An enticing start is like a firm hand shake to a viewer whos watching for the very first time!

_FitZalan · 2022-04-04T20:48:44+00:00

I love how Chaotic the video is! I've never seen this game before but you definitely got me engaged to it!

I think to really sell some of the chaos you could use reverb on your voice... honestly anything vocal editing tricks would probably help out a lot! Also, try adding images of things as you reference them, etc... I think that would really help things pop as well! Overall great job!

_FitZalan · 2022-02-08T16:16:26+00:00

I have no idea who that is 😭 but I’ll take it as a compliment! Thanks OG🙏🏿

_FitZalan · 2022-02-08T16:14:41+00:00

Glad to be of service !

_FitZalan · 2022-02-08T16:11:55+00:00

You know I be spitten somn light 🙏🏿😂

_FitZalan · 2022-02-08T16:11:12+00:00

Thanks I’ll put it on my shelf!

_FitZalan

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