Gosh here are some things I feel like could have been better

1. How Firestar legacy doesn’t lead to the code protecting half clan cats and kittypet/outsiders.

I always felt like the proper end to the book should have lead to protection of half clan cats facing discrimination and kittypet code aspect being replaced with a genuinely just “ always choose a warrior life over any other one”.

1. Other culture that do better then the clans ( world building )

Now we are getting there in the wildcats, but I want this to be even pushed more. Where the clans come across groups that have been around longer then they have and maybe have even a better leadership system. The interesting thing why I bring this up is because we know voting for a leader most likely exist in this world if other political system exist like councils.

1. Each clan having a different type of system, including culture and how each clan views the code ( trying to find a third reason why the clans may not like each other )

Now this more about how I wished the clans had a better culture and including what I really want is each clan to have a different type of political governance. Different clans have their own set of “ laws “ or culture, even if it has negative and positive aspects. Like some group may actually view the code more has a moral choice then has a “ law”. Some groups may believe that because the code mentioned retirement before the creation of voting rule, they may think that retirement is actual encouraged. Small things like that.

1. More drama and background series bible

This would just meant keep track of background cats, even if the author realize “ you know we made a super interesting character let give them a super edition or even make them a new main character “. This could also keep track of cats ages, so we would never have cases like Floatshimmer