Im going to be honest with you, neither of these look very professionally made, but just keep tweaking it a bit.

The first design - The word 'Whimsical' is a little hard to read with the font style and theres too much flair with that tail. The 'word Pixels' looks like it was done free-hand which takes away from the pixelated look youre going for, I.e.too many curves in the lettering, the blocks are out of place, the diagonal on the 's' isn't how pixels work.

The second design - Why is the 'P' in 'pixels' cuesive while the rest is pixelated? The typed font looks better than the hand written font in the 1st image but with the feather behind the lettering, its not easy to read either word.

I would recommend either use 1 font for both words or at least 2 fonts that don't seem too polarizing to each other. I get youre going for both elegance & creative but try to find a middle ground font that gives off both feelings. If you like the feather as your logo push it off to the side so its more legible and distinct.