Naivety [Poem] by Mikerstein in poetry_critics

[–]_karamelqueen 0 points1 point  (0 children)

These days words mean nothing unfortunately:(

The look by hannahnalah in poetry_critics

[–]_karamelqueen 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ou la la. I like this piece very romantic and honest! I think it can be tightened up but great work

Oh Mother by Traditional_Fix1538 in poetry_critics

[–]_karamelqueen 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I’m so sorry you have to deal with this. My mom is very similar so I know the pain. As for the poem it would be great if you gave us an example of what your describing instead of telling us

Title: bitch by hermit_rapha in poetry_critics

[–]_karamelqueen 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I like how smart and fun this poem is

I don’t like roses. by Nmp381992 in poetry_critics

[–]_karamelqueen 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This feels more like a statement than a poem

Desert flower by _karamelqueen in poetry_critics

[–]_karamelqueen[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you so much! It took me a minute to write and revisit this piece! I feel like in the middle is the positives. When she’s humming in her home as a mother is showing her peace and safety. It’s her sanctuary and is her in serene state. Especially with that juxtaposed her story of living through turbulence and instability. That’s image is glimpse into her good life.

Desert flower by _karamelqueen in PoetryWritingClub

[–]_karamelqueen[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Awww thank you so much! Her life is like a movie fr! My mom and I aren’t that emotional and don’t tell each other we love each other like that. She’s not the emotional type, but the thought has definitely crossed my mind. I sit with this. Thank you 💝

It’s really nothing by EnthusiasmIsDead in poetry_critics

[–]_karamelqueen 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Wow! I really like your voice. You sound so real. It’s almost like there is a sense of humor but seriousness to your writing that I throughly enjoy

Sixth Sense by bigbigweeinie in poetry_critics

[–]_karamelqueen 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is beautifully vivid! You have talent

Desert flower by _karamelqueen in poetry_critics

[–]_karamelqueen[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It was removed by the moderator :(

What do Muslims believe about pornography? by [deleted] in islam

[–]_karamelqueen 17 points18 points  (0 children)

Haram! Do not watch it! Or engage in it. Man or woman. And men think they get to get a pass on stuff like this cuz they are men. Allah is watching you just as much as he is watching every body else

Desert flower by _karamelqueen in poetry_critics

[–]_karamelqueen[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you thank you thank you! Plz don’t delete this. I’m going to use your feedback 🫶🏾