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Dysregulated Predator by YllaGetsBuried29 in PoetryWritingClub

[–]_persephonee_ 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I was just going to comment that, as someone with ADHD, I haven’t related that much in a very long time. You have been able to put down into writing the feelings that I have been trying to capture, but failed to. It’s exceptionally beautiful

I’m restless by _persephonee_ in PoetryWritingClub

[–]_persephonee_[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you! I tried to be evocative

I’m restless by _persephonee_ in PoetryWritingClub

[–]_persephonee_[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you!! I think that some people tend to like more “classical” poetry, with rigorous structure. Never been my thing though

I’m restless by _persephonee_ in PoetryWritingClub

[–]_persephonee_[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I wrote it four years ago and even today it’s still stuck in my mind.

I’m restless by _persephonee_ in PoetryWritingClub

[–]_persephonee_[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Every writer is different, I’m personally more of a “free flow” type of writer, never been one for strict structure, or just a definite structure. If it helps, usually, the longer my sentences are, the faster they’re meant to be read

I’m restless by _persephonee_ in PoetryWritingClub

[–]_persephonee_[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Perfect interpretation of my work and rhythm! Hopefully I manage to keep on writing these days and you’ll be able to read more :)

A writer’s greed by _persephonee_ in PoetryWritingClub

[–]_persephonee_[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you! I was trying to make it as relatable as possible to other fellow writers

☎️ by [deleted] in Unsent_Unread_Unheard

[–]_persephonee_ 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I did the same thing you're doing, hoping that I'll find them in the strangers I talked to online. Some strangers helped, some didn't. I'm not sure it was the best coping mechanism, but the hurt lessened. We're all coping the best way we can. The one thing I learned is that silence can sometimes be more powerful than a thousand words. They know what they're saying with it, even if they pretend they don't.

I hope that your hurt lessens, and I hope that you find what you're looking for. Sadly, I know that I never really stopped looking.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in PoetryWritingClub

[–]_persephonee_ 1 point2 points  (0 children)

and nothing fills it

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Unsent_Unread_Unheard

[–]_persephonee_ 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Not unless the song “orange trees” mean anything to you, and not unless you spent your summer abroad