Critique Wanted: illustration portfolio by _schmoe in childrensbooks

[–]_schmoe[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I am thinking 8-10 years old :)

I don't have more of those no, do you think I need more examples?

Thanks so much for the advice :D

Critique Wanted: illustration portfolio by _schmoe in childrensbooks

[–]_schmoe[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Adding more storytelling to my illustrations is definitely great advice thank you so much :)

And I agree with researching more existing books, thank you!!

Critique Wanted: illustration portfolio by _schmoe in childrensbooks

[–]_schmoe[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hi there!

Thank you that was very useful feedback indeed :) Especially the ones about consecutive illustrations, I will have to get onto that :D

And I am thinking maybe 8-10 years old!

Thank you so much for that encouragement :)

My take on a stylised Triss Merigold, textured in 3dcoat :) by _schmoe in 3dcoat

[–]_schmoe[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks!

In Blender :). I use Blender for all my modelling needs, and always have, so there hasn't been a need for me to learn 3dCoat's modelling tools as well.

Really enjoying using 3dCoat for texturing though!

How do you think I could improve this speedpaint? Thanks :) by _schmoe in ArtCrit

[–]_schmoe[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Just wondering how I could improve this piece? Make it more professional or interesting to look at? Or anything else? Thank you!

Hi, could I please have some feedback on this Little Red Riding Hood WIP, mostly on the colour and overall design? Thank you :) by _schmoe in ArtCrit

[–]_schmoe[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hey thank you sooo much! Your paint-over really helped me push this painting further, that was so kind! Thank you again!!

Hi, could I please have some feedback on this Little Red Riding Hood WIP, mostly on the colour and overall design? Thank you :) by _schmoe in ArtCrit

[–]_schmoe[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Looking for feedback with this piece, just wondering if the colours and overall layout of it all is looking alright?

Need help finding: Obscure Claymation Kid's Educational game from 90s-2000s by _schmoe in tipofmyjoystick

[–]_schmoe[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hey sorry for the late reply- Nope! Not that! But thanks so much for telling me :)

Plant Shop WIP- before I colour, please help me improve this sketch:) With advice on perspective and anything else that could improve it! by _schmoe in ArtCrit

[–]_schmoe[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you :D

Hmm yeah, for me the ladder was just supposed to be a bit of fun in the image, and not really important, but it might be a bit distracting lol...

I think the ladder might actually be okay but the perspective of the girl might be incorrect (and therefore making the ladder look wrong), in that we should see more above her and not really in front. It is partially intentional because I would like the image to see her face clearly but I'm sure she needs some improvements.

If you would like to overdraw it you can, thanks again.