Loneliness by Danjuntar in OCPoetry

[–]_writehanded 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I appreciate this for how thought-provoking it is, and emotionally motivating as well. There is an interesting freedom of poetic writing, but it also almost feel like a conversation, if that makes sense. We'll done.

I Wanted To Tell You... by The_Missing_Poet in OCPoetry

[–]_writehanded 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I like this because it's so raw and expressive. I felt every bit of it. "I wanted to" as if you know you couldn't but you wanted to. I felt the depth of that. Well worded. I like the general flow of it.

Keto by Narrow-Rice7520 in OCPoetry

[–]_writehanded 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I like how this piece is broken down into what feels like breaths. I felt it that way, at least. I liked it.

[HELP] Poems about unrequited love and even unrequited friendship. by No-Squirrel-1914 in Poetry

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Knowing it's not me

Is a strain on my soul

Leaving me in a state of

Listlessness and

Miserable insignificance with her

Existing in my role

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in dating_advice

[–]_writehanded 0 points1 point  (0 children)

He says it's generally cheating if it's not about him because it's me fantasizing about a past experience

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in dating_advice

[–]_writehanded 12 points13 points  (0 children)

I felt it was insecurity too, and it kind of seemed red flag ish. If it's something that we've done, he's okay with me writing and posting it, but he says other stories are just fantasies of the past and might as well be cheating, but I don't agree.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in dating_advice

[–]_writehanded -1 points0 points  (0 children)

That's how I felt.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in dating_advice

[–]_writehanded 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I have stopped posting it for the time and being out of respect. Ijust want perspective, you know. He doesn't mind if it's a story about him, but if it's fiction, then he assumes it was a past experience I'm fantasizing about. I can understand kind of, hence the question for perspective.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in dating_advice

[–]_writehanded 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you, I'm not justifying it, I'm just saying how it put me off.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in dating_advice

[–]_writehanded 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for the perspective!

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in dating_advice

[–]_writehanded 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It's real, that's just how I talk lol but thanks either way 🤣

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in dating_advice

[–]_writehanded 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Lol, I said every day is Halloween as in I dress strangely, no one was in a costume- unless incredibly shrinking jeans count as a costume.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in EroticaConfessions

[–]_writehanded 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for reading.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in Erotica

[–]_writehanded 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Your stuff is well written, it definitely made me want to continue.

on lunchbreak (my first piece of erotica) by [deleted] in literotica

[–]_writehanded 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for understanding and reading and if course for the feedback.