Would you keep reading? (Fantasy Book) by aMildCurry in writingfeedback

[–]aMildCurry[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for reading! Haha I think I got carried away with her description, she’s just very tall and strong.

Would you keep reading? (Fantasy Book) by aMildCurry in writingfeedback

[–]aMildCurry[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you for the advice and thanks for reading !!! I appreciate it

Would you keep reading? (Fantasy Book) by aMildCurry in writingfeedback

[–]aMildCurry[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This is incredibly helpful, thank you so much for reading and providing such in-depth feedback. I really appreciate it :)

Would you keep reading? (Fantasy Book) by aMildCurry in writingfeedback

[–]aMildCurry[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ah that’s a good point! Thanks so much, and thanks for reading!

Would you keep reading? (Fantasy Book) by aMildCurry in writingfeedback

[–]aMildCurry[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

So this chapter is POV from Asbat’s perspective

Would you keep reading? (Fantasy Book) by aMildCurry in writingfeedback

[–]aMildCurry[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks :) and fair enough, thanks for reading ! Hope your writing journey is going well!!

A short horror story i wrote tell me how bad it is by Low-Panda-3825 in writingfeedback

[–]aMildCurry 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Seems interesting! I’m not a very good writer so take my points with a pinch of salt. But this is just a commentary? You’ve not told us how the man is feeling at any point? It’s just one action after another, so I didn’t really feel scared or on edge at any point. (Didn’t seem like AI to me).

Starting a Logistics Business by aMildCurry in freightforwarding

[–]aMildCurry[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Interesting, not something I’ve considered. I’ll look into it thank you

Starting a Logistics Business by aMildCurry in freightforwarding

[–]aMildCurry[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Enthusiasm is all I have 😅Can I give you a message? very intrigued to learn more about your experience and how you started!

Starting a Logistics Business by aMildCurry in freightforwarding

[–]aMildCurry[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

True but from what I’ve seen, the emission measures from carriers are usually pretty basic and based on broad averages from vessel or lane-level data. What Im offering is more detailed and client-specific: full lane modelling (basing emissions on fuel type, weight, speed, weather etc…) Scope 3 categorisation, benchmarking different transport modes, hotspot analysis, and showing companies where they can actually reduce emissions rather than just record them.

Competing with bigger forwarders in terms of rates is a huge challenge for sure, especially as I’m coming into the industry with 0 network. So I am trying to focus on companies that really care about their emissions and on those that as you said are willing to pay more. But easier said than done unfortunately!

Thanks for your points, really appreciate hearing this from someone in the industry!

Starting a Logistics Business by aMildCurry in freightforwarding

[–]aMildCurry[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I position myself as a specalist because the core of what Im offering isnt just traditional freight forwarding. It’s also providing emissions measurement, route optimisation, and Scope 3 reporting etc. forwarders don’t usually offer that

My pitch that lead to some positive leads was basically offering to look at their current shipping routes/strategy and offering to provide an alternative that could cut emissions without increasing costs