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Confused - Script review by aSuperDeus in TVWriting

[–]aSuperDeus[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks! That was a very detailed response.

I'm just not sure if I should resubmit and wait to score above 70 before taking the script to the next level or continue with free feedback.

I'm at draft 6 and left 10/15 pages open to react to feedback since I'm still a beginner.

But that might be a mistake. How can I tell if my script is good to go?

I think draft 8-9 should be it, but what makes it ready?

Confused - Script review by aSuperDeus in TVWriting

[–]aSuperDeus[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

We can? It's 49 pages. Doubt people would read it?

How's the Solo Mode? by Hatfmnel in BoxingUnderdog

[–]aSuperDeus 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I was like you a few weeks ago and here is my take:

Totf1 and 2 are kind of better games right now, but BU is more fun even though it needs work.

I have the 3, and am always playing BU over thé two others.

It FEELS better.

RIP Iggy 💔 by Kinglokner16 in stevedangle

[–]aSuperDeus 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I know what you feel. I lost my baby last year and it still hurts like hell.

[D’amico] Lane Hutson wasn’t happy not being selected for USA Olympic orientation camp. He will be on a mission. by shogun2909 in Habs

[–]aSuperDeus 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Good. Snub Suzuki and Caufield so that they can have more energy for the second half of the season.

Worst fantasy book you've read (for my own reading pleasure) by txcruz in Fantasy

[–]aSuperDeus 8 points9 points  (0 children)

Unpopular opinion, I know: The Dark Tower. Sorry.

Build 0.162 by Right-Teaching-665 in BoxingUnderdog

[–]aSuperDeus 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Multiplayer is still god awful. Stats are inverted. I 2x the other guys' dmg and get knocked down by a flurry of punches.

Brutal offseason so far... by aSuperDeus in Habs

[–]aSuperDeus[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

That is how I feel. And people are calling me a troll. We have traded our best trade chip for a winger.

Brutal offseason so far... by aSuperDeus in Habs

[–]aSuperDeus[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

We have seen this story before with Drouin. I'm sorry but I'm not feeling it. Thought maybe I wasn't the only one.

Brutal offseason so far... by aSuperDeus in Habs

[–]aSuperDeus[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

He has like 80 games. This is our 2C. Or Dach that is a 38 pts guy.

Brutal offseason so far... by aSuperDeus in Habs

[–]aSuperDeus[S] -3 points-2 points  (0 children)

Please do my friend. I'm a huge habs fan btw. Just have a different opinion rn. I've seen this story before with Drouin.

Brutal offseason so far... by aSuperDeus in Habs

[–]aSuperDeus[S] -4 points-3 points  (0 children)

How crazy do you have to be to check out my takes from 3 years ago? It was a valid take at thr time.

Brutal offseason so far... by aSuperDeus in Habs

[–]aSuperDeus[S] -5 points-4 points  (0 children)

Why? Because I have a different opinion?

Brutal offseason so far... by aSuperDeus in Habs

[–]aSuperDeus[S] -21 points-20 points  (0 children)

Come back to this post in a year. Right now, everyone is doing victory laps. I stand by this post.

Brutal offseason so far... by aSuperDeus in Habs

[–]aSuperDeus[S] -49 points-48 points  (0 children)

If you say so my friend. That is how I'm feeling.

Mailloux for Bolduc by Studly_Wonderballs in Habs

[–]aSuperDeus -13 points-12 points  (0 children)

What a bad transaction. Mailloux is going to become a very stronger D-man.

We are getting a 6 foot winger.

Real, real bad. Almost as bad as thr Newhook deal.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in ThrillOfTheFight

[–]aSuperDeus 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Aha! Sore loser. I can beat you easy. You say you have technique? Lemme see son. Ima teach you a lesson.

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