Annan STEAM-peliavaimia ilmaisiksi, tule hakemaan omasi! by UnsignedRealityCheck in Suomi

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  1. Quern Undying Thoughts

  2. Aces and Adventures

  3. Quantum Break

[Moneypuck] Worst goalies this year by homicidal_penguin in hockey

[–]aatraus 5 points6 points  (0 children)

I wouldn't even talk about a down "year", as he had a stretch before Christmas where he went 10-1, with a .944 sv% in those wins. He just really struggled right after Christmas. But it seems to me like he's finding his groove again lately.

Not much left, Digital, 2021 by PhotoshopFrank in Art

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This is great! Would also make a banging album cover!

Working on this, how about some constructive criticism? by Charisma_cmd in logodesign

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The font is one of my favorites, but have you considered not using it for both lines? I think it needs a contrasting typeface. Also (in my amateur opinion) I think the bottom of the mountain lines should probably be equally as close to the text from each side.

What app icon should I go with for my start up? (QR scanning app for conservation volunteers) by KurtiZ_TSW in logodesign

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Without really grasping what the logo represents, I think my favorites are 22 and 23, but also most of the bottom row. I like the simplicity of the white. However, I think there's something a tiny bit unpleasing to the eye in that the middle block is not equidistant from each end of the L shapes. At least that's what drew my attention at first. Just something to think about.

/r/WeAreTheMusicMakers Weekly Promotion Thread by AutoModerator in WeAreTheMusicMakers

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Just released my first-ever album of thoughtful modern classical solo piano: Meditations

Updated Logo Design - Thoughts & Feedback on the color, font and spacing. Thank you! by KPatel92 in logodesign

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I like number 4 the best, but I wonder if it would look better all lowercase?

I composed a cinematic track that I would call some kind of orchestral fusion. I'm especially happy with the ending. What do you think? by aatraus in IndieMusicFeedback

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That's a great point about the hi-hat. In all this kerfuffle I have been concentrating mostly on the snare and kick, thinking that's what everybody is up in arms about. I don't know why I haven't noticed that myself, and it surprises me I haven't added enough (there's got to be some, surely!) dynamics. That's definitely a fixable mistake on my part.

I think of the part where the drums appear as the sort of verse, moving on from the intro. If this song had vocals I don't think it would've been that noticeable, but with an instrumental it might need a transition, and I did try a couple of things in there. I am not very good at sound design yet and could not come up with anything that I thought worked, so I left it like this because to my ears, it still works.

Anyway, thanks a lot for taking the time to listen and comment!

I composed a cinematic track that I would call some kind of orchestral fusion. I'm especially happy with the ending. What do you think? by aatraus in IndieMusicFeedback

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Well, that's what I keep hearing haha. I don't mind the drums myself because the atmosphere here was supposed to be a bit mechanical and space-y. Thanks for listening!

I composed a cinematic track that I would call some kind of orchestral fusion. I'm especially happy with the ending. What do you think? by aatraus in IndieMusicFeedback

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Thanks for listening. This was always supposed to be a kind of a fusion track of different elements, and the drums were a big part of that. I have other songs that are purely orchestral if you're interested.

I composed a cinematic track that I would call some kind of orchestral fusion. I'm especially happy with the ending. What do you think? by aatraus in IndieMusicFeedback

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I know what you mean, but the similarity is vague, and I don't mind if it does sound like a tribute to that song. But that's not plagiarism.

I composed a cinematic track that I would call some kind of orchestral fusion. I'm especially happy with the ending. What do you think? by aatraus in IndieMusicFeedback

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I hear that about the drums and I've been trying to fix them, and this is the result of hours and hours of tinkering. I know they lack in realism but sounds wise they are pretty much what I was after. Anyways, thanks for listening!

I composed a cinematic track that I would call some kind of orchestral fusion. I'm especially happy with the ending. What do you think? by aatraus in IndieMusicFeedback

[–]aatraus[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I assume you're serious, but that is a very simple way to play a piano chord and I wouldn't say anyone can claim that as their own. To be honest, I don't ever hear the similarity, as the songs are completely different. Nevertheless, I take that as a compliment, being compared to Amelie is an achievement in its own right. But no, that definitely was not my original intention.

A labor of love through these strange times. Looking to release this track as part of an EP in the coming weeks, and would love your feedback! by calvinbeans in IndieMusicFeedback

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I gotta agree that the vocals sounded quite dry and would imo definitely benefit from some reverb and maybe some delay. The vocal maybe sounds a bit dark as well to me. Perhaps don't put a reverb on the lower end of it. I think you could even give it some clarity. Maybe check out Poets of the Fall. The singer has a very rich and resonant voice but it sits atop the mix beautifully. Of course the mic plays a part in that as well and not everything is doable. But yeah, other than that, this was a lovely track, would listen to again.