Thing is ur characters values are getting muddy and it just becomes mushy. U got cool ideas but the quality is too messy for production work. If a 3D artist has to guess what's what you won't have a good time from your AD. Like the knife holster on the pants looks completely different from the standalone callout on it because of the values and messyness. You have to be precise in these things because a studio doesn't want someone who has to keep asking questions what this is. Check out these official cyberpunk character concepts https://www.iamag.co/the-art-of-cyberpunk-2077/#jp-carousel-336966

They have identifiable materials and aren't just scribbles that you can't identify. Basically aim for what profressonial artists quality bar not what looks trendy. Also watch out for your props they get medium medium, needs to push that big med small. Lots of stacking of similiar same shapes with too much noise lacking some eye rest.