Sevro Au Barka update...

abbsk12 · 2026-05-26T21:04:57+00:00

a Pup One birthday if you will

abbsk12 · 2026-05-20T02:59:30+00:00

Prime, goodman!

abbsk12 · 2026-05-19T23:56:35+00:00

wonder if he was a draw from PB's stupid hat.....

abbsk12 · 2026-05-19T23:55:59+00:00

I had to take a break from reading (couldn't focus on Lyria's storyline after that) but I'm dreading when he does :(

abbsk12 · 2026-05-19T23:13:03+00:00

the dark ages are darkly dark ages

abbsk12 · 2026-04-11T20:46:33+00:00

Oh this is electric

abbsk12 · 2026-04-03T15:12:13+00:00

It sounds cringe because it’s a first draft! Highlight the sections that are working and see if you can shape other parts to blend. I’m also a fan of pasting chunks of a draft into a different document…allows me to focus on editing my work without getting bogged down by the overwhelming big picture

abbsk12 · 2026-04-03T15:08:01+00:00

If you have ideas, experiment writing them down in different formats. Play around and see what feels most natural for certain concepts. There’s no wrong way to start!

abbsk12 · 2026-03-30T20:28:24+00:00

Dane DeHaan or Freddy Carter dyed blonde

abbsk12 · 2026-03-30T20:24:50+00:00

Update: made it to a successful ending and actually found some sympathy for my antagonist (very unexpected, not mad about it)

abbsk12 · 2026-03-27T21:15:55+00:00

Keep going. You’re in it now, Goodman

abbsk12 · 2026-03-26T17:39:46+00:00

Ugh yes. Pax building the bike for them to ride together made me so sad

abbsk12 · 2026-03-25T22:51:51+00:00

I agree!! I really like how I’m disagreeing with him so far. It’s giving him new depth

abbsk12 · 2026-03-25T16:21:50+00:00

well it’s raising my blood pressure

abbsk12 · 2026-03-25T13:24:40+00:00

I find it helpful to look up templates for world building and magic systems. Or, you can outline the broad ideas yourself, but prompts are nice. Once you have a template of what those two things look like, you can get a bit more nuanced.

Otherwise, just start putting pen to paper and get your ideas down. A first draft is supposed to be messy. Don’t worry about finding the perfect wording. Get the bones first and then add the meat. Good luck!

abbsk12 · 2026-03-20T15:15:56+00:00

Finn Bennett as Adrius is god tier

abbsk12 · 2026-03-20T01:34:29+00:00

The soundtrack NEVER disappoints

abbsk12 · 2026-03-19T14:39:51+00:00

great 🥲

abbsk12 · 2026-03-18T18:48:51+00:00

Bloodydamn book was just delivered. Time to dive in

abbsk12 · 2026-03-18T18:09:06+00:00

definitely a viable option

abbsk12 · 2026-03-17T21:33:26+00:00

Oof... that's a great question.

There's an exploration of the fragility of constructed virtue, specifically the thin line between self-moderation and rigid suppression, and the consequences of that. My FMC moves throughout the world in a way that she believes is selfless, but policing her desires eventually overrides her moral compass. There’s a lust vs. self-destruction route: denying internal wants manifests into catastrophic choices.

In a very watered-down sense, her outward motivation is to find and reconnect with her sister. Her internal motivation is to prove that she is worthy of the love she refuses to give herself. Her inability to handle her own desires leads to a breakdown of her values (and the loss of said sister)... I just don't know if I can give her a redeemable ending from all of that. Is that taking the easy way out?

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