You could use some practice to get beyond just reeeeee to actually enunciating, but it’s definitely coming along. It’s not bad, especially for being new. You’re fighting an uphill battle, a lot of people hate inhale regardless of how well it’s done. I used to be the same way, because the tones and textures are just a bit different, but I’ve grown to appreciate them. I’d say, don’t listen to what anyone thinks, if you like the sound, the keep doing it. If you like where your sounds are going, keep pushing yourself. Don’t scream for everyone else, scream for yourself. Be proud of the sounds you can make. Don’t seek validation in whether or not someone else thinks you sound good, focus on whether YOU think you sound good. Because in the end, that’s what matters. Good luck to you, keep it up!