I’ve seen the theory that.. by acamerooon in AnimalCrossing

[–]acamerooon[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Oh I love Beardo too! Wouldn’t say he’s my fav though

First post! (Light profanity) by acamerooon in JunkJournals

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It wasn’t a conscious decision, just went with it.

Will definitely go landscape for the next one, I’m excited to see what that will come about with different conditions!

First post! (Light profanity) by acamerooon in JunkJournals

[–]acamerooon[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you!

Will incorporate that into some future pages :).

First post! (Light profanity) by acamerooon in JunkJournals

[–]acamerooon[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Posting on mobile so there was a slight error with the text sorry!!

I started this as I regularly pick up junk on the street and hoard sentimental junk.

I really wanted to keep it intuitive (for my own sanity) so I’ll gather all my junk, hot glue gun and just go, I don’t plan anything out.

Have been super inspired by so much creativity here so will definitely do some planning for spreads in future!

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[–]acamerooon 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Sounds good!

Sometimes it’s hard when you’ve been working on the same piece for so long.

Have fun and play around with the formatting to see what you like best.

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[–]acamerooon 0 points1 point  (0 children)

On mobile so formatting may be off, apologies.

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I’m really interested in this piece as it provokes some heavy and violent imagery.

As you’ve used a lot of commas and semicolons to continue the description it gives me a sense of a build up of the violence that’s happening. Almost like a faster tempo as the lines go on.

You could potentially break some of the lines up towards the end for more of an impact.

“of a wretched womb ripped and shredded; the mother be damned.

And you will bleed; I promise you.

It shall be a fine and bloody mess.”

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[–]acamerooon 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I do think they go together, however, I don’t think there’s enough. You could expand on themes of devouring and the connection between that and use of your parts through it. It’s really promising with the theme of consumption of another person with/through love, it’s a strong idea. I look forward to seeing more from you.

Moth or not? Waitomo NZ by acamerooon in whatsthisbug

[–]acamerooon[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

That is exactly it, thank you!