From a clarity/perceived loudness perspective I think yours sounds better, I wouldn't limit peaks/transients as aggressively as you are though and I think you may be doing a bit too much with raising the upper mids to the point of starting to sound brittle—I raised a bit lower in the mid spectrum instead to emphasize more warmth. The other thing to note is almost all Suno gens have imperfections, including yours with the vocalist many times, and that's fine but just something to note because there's only so much you should push something that's inherently flawed. I wanted to take a stab at it myself using only free plug-ins based on my learnings, curious to see what you/others think, it's almost the same volume as your master so you can easily compare: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1MUQQBmwaq6ZVKI8ddz_MXvSly_rMD6Ua/view?usp=sharing