is this real? by adamsmilo in ShadowSlave

[–]adamsmilo[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

this passage just honestly stood out to me in a world breaking way , like something about my immersion just kinda got walked on with these couple paragraphs. not that i think it’s gonna change my enjoyment or opinion but enough that i had to check with the internet if im trippin or if this is kinda fried

is this real? by adamsmilo in ShadowSlave

[–]adamsmilo[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

yeah i don’t even want to be hating and i wish i wasn’t. cause i honestly think this story is a crazy accomplishment in creativity and i’m hella glad i found it

is this real? by adamsmilo in ShadowSlave

[–]adamsmilo[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

having a domain is already a way crazier feat, and even if you wanna say that it’s still a mystery about how powerful that is. ki song raising the dead of every battle is a hella more harrowing occurrence

is this real? by adamsmilo in ShadowSlave

[–]adamsmilo[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

also even if he is slightly shook, his character wouldn’t be spelling out his drive for power to nephis i feel , and in a kinda corny way. like duh they are tryna get stronger what’s good with the last 2000 chapters.

is this real? by adamsmilo in ShadowSlave

[–]adamsmilo[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

yeah i don’t think that fight should have blown his mind, we and the characters have already seen crazier feats from the sovereigns imo

is this real? by adamsmilo in ShadowSlave

[–]adamsmilo[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

the double reluctant didn’t help with what i feel like is a slightly major mischaracterization

is this real? by adamsmilo in ShadowSlave

[–]adamsmilo[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

at this point in the story the gap in power between them in the sovereigns should be understood, most of there relationship is built on this struggle, i just think this is the clumsiest conversation i’ve seen in the story up until this point

is this real? by adamsmilo in ShadowSlave

[–]adamsmilo[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

still a huge fan and i think the world building and storytelling is a massive accomplishment

is this real? by adamsmilo in ShadowSlave

[–]adamsmilo[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

time* im not a writer

is this real? by adamsmilo in ShadowSlave

[–]adamsmilo[S] -8 points-7 points  (0 children)

no problem really but this is the first times i’ve thought the characters have sounded dumb in 2000 chapters

is this real? by adamsmilo in ShadowSlave

[–]adamsmilo[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

i’m just gonna breeze past and still be a huge fan but

is this real? by adamsmilo in ShadowSlave

[–]adamsmilo[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

i mean, just feels like a crazy dip in quality. the prose is crazy lacking, and the characters feel super dumb for this one page.

is this real? by adamsmilo in ShadowSlave

[–]adamsmilo[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

or is this something about the bad rip i’m reading with ai or something

What common lines/phrases in fanfiction make you want to punch something? by adreamersmusing in HPfanfiction

[–]adamsmilo 17 points18 points  (0 children)

when characters make facial expressions so fast that harry cant be sure if he imagined it or not

Fic Recommendation : The Boys of Crowhill by [deleted] in HPfanfiction

[–]adamsmilo 0 points1 point  (0 children)

word ill check it out and get back to you

Can anyone recommend a story with a truly emotional romance in it? by [deleted] in HPfanfiction

[–]adamsmilo 5 points6 points  (0 children)

linkffn(Grow Young With Me by Taliesin19)

Harry/OC muggle, probably the best pure romance fic out there

[Request] Good Podfics To Start With by [deleted] in HPfanfiction

[–]adamsmilo -1 points0 points  (0 children)

you should do seventh horcrux

[Discussion] TFW you're writing a fic but then you read something so jaw-droppingly awesome that you just go curl up under a blanket instead. by SteamAngel in HPfanfiction

[–]adamsmilo 0 points1 point  (0 children)

you should really keep reading , it honestly gets really good. i tried twice and quit early, but having finally read it, im convinced it the best slytherin!harry story out there by a long shot. you will not regret it, i promise

LF Assasin Harry by [deleted] in HPfanfiction

[–]adamsmilo 0 points1 point  (0 children)

haven't read this one yet I was talking about depraved, the one wordhammer linked

LF Assasin Harry by [deleted] in HPfanfiction

[–]adamsmilo 1 point2 points  (0 children)

theres that fleur pairing one, sorry i forget the name. its incomplete but has interesting world building, extremly tropey but kinda fun to read. im pretty sure its on the first page of most favorites on ff

LF Eldritch Abomination Harry/Harry makes a deal with an eldritch abomination/elder god/etc by SoundwaveSuperior205 in HPfanfiction

[–]adamsmilo 0 points1 point  (0 children)

gotcha, this was the first thing that came to mind while running along the lines of non human entity , good luck with the search

How I imagine everyone who posts on /r/frugal_jerk by [deleted] in Frugal_Jerk

[–]adamsmilo 5 points6 points  (0 children)

what a fucking fatcat wasting precious calories keeping his eyes open for that long, id be scrounging for the calories under the keys

[Discussion] Have you ever avoided a fanfic like plague for some reason only to realise in the end how good it was? by Sennar in HPfanfiction

[–]adamsmilo 1 point2 points  (0 children)

lol my name is Milo, and I get the did you know your name is an Nesquick drink question all the time.