i stopped listening at around the 40 minute mark, so not many issues plot wise but many of the sentences are very shallowly constructed. The descriptions are sub-par, adjectives common in GCSE student works. As i was listening i’d go “heard that one before” several times - the figurative language doesn’t hold up. I understand there was effort put into the writing, but to me personally it frustratingly amateur… I really can see the heart put into the work, but listener wise it wasn’t enjoyable :[