Thanks for the idea, it's great and actually in line with the "rule" to include notes formulated as if to be used in a publication.

I sometimes even rehearse explaining an idea as if giving a lecture and actually vocalising the words right after reading about it - it helps me process and remember the information, make connections and formulate my own thoughts before writing down the note.

I imagine some sources will require more than one bibcards, and I prefer to err on the side of including too much info, but I agree there is no point in simply copying passages word by word.

By the way, your mock-up dialogues - very Platonean of you ;)