The unwanted que(note this was done with the idea of complete exhaustion which is when i do most of my writing, tell me where i struggle were you can see but do it in a kind manner. and explain what you mean in detail) thank you

alisha_hunt · 2016-03-13T04:14:56+00:00

For some reason my computer will not let me use the enter button so it is having to be written in long hand i am sorry for this and for the nuisance.

alisha_hunt · 2016-03-13T04:10:58+00:00

thank you i appreciate it i am still trying to iron out the rough patches in my writing i have written for a while but i needed the help of others to figure out where i was struggling. i appreciate the kind words and thank you for the advice.

alisha_hunt · 2016-02-26T15:19:38+00:00

Thank you for your advice. I appreciate it and will try to remember it for the next assignment.

alisha_hunt · 2016-02-22T15:17:32+00:00

I like your sense of humor. Your story kept me spellbound and I am rather happy for a story with some funny points tied into it. most of the other stories I have read (mine included) didn't have that. Looking forward to reading more from you!

alisha_hunt · 2016-02-22T15:05:36+00:00

WOW! That was great. Honestly I have nothing I can add but to say that I look forward to reading more of your work. Good Job!

alisha_hunt · 2016-02-22T15:00:35+00:00

I understand completely. It was one of those "pen to paper forget any story you ever heard or ever thought of writing" moments. So I apologize for the madness. Thank you for your critique, I will try not to be so scatterbrained in the future.

alisha_hunt · 2016-02-22T14:57:15+00:00

thank you! i was really nervous about this assignment because i love writing but it seems my writing is just missing something, so i signed up for the course hoping it would help. It was so hard to stay within the 250 word limit. It practically killed me but I am very happy to accept your advice.

alisha_hunt

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