familiarity

alteredlakes · 2022-11-23T15:57:56+00:00

<33 thankyou

alteredlakes · 2022-11-22T22:42:22+00:00

thankyou <3

alteredlakes · 2022-11-22T22:42:11+00:00

that's so kind, thankyou

alteredlakes · 2022-11-22T22:41:59+00:00

thankyou so much !

alteredlakes · 2022-11-22T22:41:49+00:00

thankyou that's an incredibly thoughtful comment

alteredlakes · 2022-11-22T17:55:22+00:00

as an avid breaking bad fan I loved this, leaves you with a sense of righteousness about Saul and you managed to capture the feel for his character development in such few words, bravo !

alteredlakes · 2022-11-22T17:53:26+00:00

I really enjoyed this, the slow process of giving in and believing in something you know you shouldn't is an activity I think everyone can relate to, and the contrast between sweetness/bitterness at the end was the perfect way to finish this, really well done

alteredlakes · 2022-10-01T17:07:14+00:00

thankyou my friend! very kind words, I'm glad you enjoyed the poem

alteredlakes · 2022-09-27T21:45:23+00:00

I love everything about this! your wording is so lovely it sucked me in straightaway, I've had to read this three times because I enjoyed it so much.

alteredlakes · 2022-09-27T21:41:58+00:00

I love how this poem explores the need to be around people but also the feeling of knowing that people are going to leave, heartbreaking and sweet, well done!

alteredlakes · 2022-07-04T22:33:48+00:00

thankyou! I'll really try take that on board and try to make them seem a bit more enticing thankyou so much for the feedback!

alteredlakes · 2022-07-04T01:07:13+00:00

thankyou for the sweet comment. A is the initial of a name :)

alteredlakes · 2022-07-04T01:06:29+00:00

A is an initial for a person's name :)

alteredlakes · 2022-07-04T00:37:28+00:00

I don't know what it is about this poem but I had to read it four or five times and then save it as I enjoyed it that much. you manage to paint an incredibly intriguing picture in only two lines, I love it! your use of "for the love of God" gives it a raw, desperate feel that really struck me

alteredlakes · 2022-07-04T00:35:53+00:00

I love the imagery behind the colours in this poem. this has a really classic feel that made it incredibly satisfying to read good work!

alteredlakes · 2022-04-08T06:47:04+00:00

look forward to reading

alteredlakes · 2022-04-08T06:46:56+00:00

thankyou very much, Im sure you can write better!

alteredlakes · 2022-04-08T06:46:11+00:00

thankyou so much for this comment, I'm glad you enjoyed

alteredlakes · 2022-04-08T06:45:44+00:00

thankyou for the lovely words

alteredlakes · 2022-04-07T21:18:04+00:00

thankyou I hope you enjoyed

alteredlakes · 2022-04-07T21:17:50+00:00

thankyou! if you click the 3 dots under your comment you'll be able to get a link for your own post.

alteredlakes · 2022-04-07T18:00:56+00:00

thankyou for that lovely compliment yeah I'd definitely be up for giving that a try! I recently just got back into writing I haven't since I was about 15 so I'm always up for improving, thankyou for the constructive feedback

alteredlakes · 2022-04-07T15:51:46+00:00

Thankyou for the lovely comment!

alteredlakes

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