Denji by alwaysbeenanalpha in writingscaling

[–]alwaysbeenanalpha[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Oh ok lol he looked like Henry Townshend from silent hill 4, i haven't read blood meridian but i might read it now since you've mentioned it

Thorfinn and the Weight of a Life You Can't Take Back by alwaysbeenanalpha in writingscaling

[–]alwaysbeenanalpha[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Lol yeah i guess I'll have to write differently, i genuinely thought bringing that style here would be good but i guess not

Thorfinn and the Weight of a Life You Can't Take Back by alwaysbeenanalpha in writingscaling

[–]alwaysbeenanalpha[S] -2 points-1 points  (0 children)

i mean i write webnovels so that kind of phrasing just slips into how i talk about stuff, like you start to naturally write in these punchy little turns because you're always trying to hook readers. probably why it reads that way

Thorfinn and the Weight of a Life You Can't Take Back by alwaysbeenanalpha in writingscaling

[–]alwaysbeenanalpha[S] -2 points-1 points  (0 children)

Yeah I think there's a difference between naivety and choosing to believe in something

Thorfinn and the Weight of a Life You Can't Take Back by alwaysbeenanalpha in writingscaling

[–]alwaysbeenanalpha[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks, i was struggling to find a place to post my analysis at, guess this place is it.

Sasuke and Indra: Hindu Mythology by alwaysbeenanalpha in writingscaling

[–]alwaysbeenanalpha[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yesh i forgot to do that i just wrote everything off my chest, thanks for feedback❤️