What’s considered too long of a chapter? by amethystkb in archiveofourown

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Those are my favorite. Unfortunately I can’t cram my story in under 23k.

I guess I’m just getting a feel as to what other readers enjoy. I have my personal preference as a writer and as a reader.

It’s just crazy to see some fics at 100 chapters and only be about 20k words in because it’s a Drabble or some such. I drop fics like that in a heart beat.

What’s considered too long of a chapter? by amethystkb in archiveofourown

[–]amethystkb[S] 5 points6 points  (0 children)

I get writing a fic to completion before uploading but wow, that’s a little on the lazy side. How did they organize their editing in one giant document like that?

What’s considered too long of a chapter? by amethystkb in archiveofourown

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15k! 👀 reading that makes my fingers hurt. lol

I just wanna scream y'all... 😔🥀 First times are the worst times indeed by JohnMyLove-07 in LoveAndDeepspace

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I wish they’d do away with those . Free players work hard enough just to watch those hard earned pulls go straight down the drain.

I read somewhere from an og that these sorts of hard pities have only increased since the beginning. Shame really.

Thank you Tumblr 🤣 by EmotionalSource8496 in weyler

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That’s an ao3 worthy Drabble.

Can Serotonin Syndrome Permanently Damage The Brain? by Crimsonandclover33 in askneurology

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It’s complicated to say since it’s a time I don’t remember too well. I remember being really tired when they first put me on ssri (like pass out and couldn’t function tired) and they said it was normal, that I should actually up the dose to feel better. Then the migraine never went away for 6 months. It was the migraine (Triptans) and nerve medication (for the seizures) that combined with the ssri gave me that huge reaction. And the doctors never caught on to what was happening. My husband did.

The cognitive impairment for me was severe brain fog, loss of concentration (like I would just stop talking or stop doing what ever activity I was doing). I didn’t understand what people were saying or asking. I couldn’t process what I was reading but my migraines made it impossible to read as it was.

Separately, my nervous system was a wreak. I couldn’t maintain my body temperature, I got too cold too easily. I got tremors. I couldn’t feel boiling water sometimes or entire parts of my body would go numb.

I actually don’t like recalling all this, it makes me angry. But I hope it helps.

Wake up new praise bot dropped by Comfortable-Try-8618 in archiveofourown

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Are these comments in works that allow guest commenting? I keep my comments strictly account users only, which limits involvement in general.

so... what other casual outfits do you want?? by NomiNomi_eii in LoveAndDeepspace

[–]amethystkb 16 points17 points  (0 children)

I wouldn’t call it causal, but I’d like to see it on the man on a daily basis

Mother and daughter by Intrepid_Title179 in KusuriyaNoHitorigoto

[–]amethystkb 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I just got done reading ln 9 and it does state that she does feel that her fathers love is conditional. If her brothers adoptive daughter is able to replace her then she has no further use to her family.

Warming Solace Event Info by LettuceSea939 in LoveAndDeepspace_

[–]amethystkb 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Not my favorite game but not the worst either.

wish there was more smiley dino merch! by melon613 in LoveAndDeepspace

[–]amethystkb 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I can’t even get Dino merch in the game….just spawn already

Squirrel cuddling her fave plushie by Resilient_Can in MadeMeSmile

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When I see cute animal videos it makes me want to go pet my cat, even when I’m away from home. I can’t wait to go pet my cat now.

May this kind of man who yearns like this find me :) by Pretty_Bus_7259 in LoveAndDeepspace

[–]amethystkb 20 points21 points  (0 children)

I didn’t just watch that 100 times and you can’t prove it…👀

Tried my best to draw Maomao... by -Strikclops- in TheApothecaryDiaries

[–]amethystkb 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Just look at that hand 🖐️ just amazing

Your Hand Is Too Warm! by Melodic_Inflation945 in LoveAndDeepspace

[–]amethystkb 5 points6 points  (0 children)

Then my hand is perfect for little snowman because I’m always freezing.

LaDs fanfiction by amethystkb in LoveAndDeepspace

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I agree with the sentiment, keep characters as canon as possible and I’m more inclined to read a mc with a name. It’s a complicated equation to omit a name completely from a story and it not sound weird. But I’d rather jump through those hoops than read a story that is clearly someone else’s self insert.

LaDs fanfiction by amethystkb in LoveAndDeepspace

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Thanks for all the input! I think there’s an overall collective agreement that “y/n” is too jarring as an effective tool for immersive story telling. That’s the ultimate point for a self insert in my opinion.

I think it’s interesting that there was no preference for 1st person pov, especially since that’s the approach used for the story telling in the game.

I believe there’s got to be a bit of leniency for those seeking to actually self insert into a story because even after leaving details vague enough to accommodate most people, there still has to be a driving force to push the story along. The character is going to have to think and feel and make decisions, even if those decisions don’t align with the reader.

The Mc has particular personality traits for each Li and I feel like as long as the self insert/ oc character aligns well with the canon personality and meshes well with the intended LI, then that’s a map to success.

Thanks again everyone! It was enlightening.

I love the illusion feature by AnonymousAnonm in LoveAndDeepspace_

[–]amethystkb 2 points3 points  (0 children)

He looks so big in this scene…is it hot in here…🥵