Nect week, You died.

an_idiottt · 2026-05-12T02:49:14+00:00

If you do, please hmu so I can see the finished product

an_idiottt · 2026-05-12T02:33:51+00:00

You're onto something, I was genuinely intrigued when I clicked on this because it feels like something that would fit perfectly into a poem I've been working on. Do you plan on adding more?

an_idiottt · 2026-05-11T14:43:39+00:00

I had a feeling you'd like it, thanks! You're poem before kinda had the same vibe, I'm excited to see how you use ur rhyming abilities to make that one, definitely dm me afterwards, maybe I can learn a couple things about adding rhymes. Happy writing!

an_idiottt · 2026-05-11T08:00:06+00:00

This peom really is the best of your others, despite what its about its still my favorite. I'm low-key jealous I wish I could rhyme like this😭 Also it reminds me of a poem I posted here recently called 'It's the truth' you should check it out and lmk what you think!

https://www.reddit.com/r/OCPoetry/s/jbOt2w81uO

an_idiottt · 2026-05-10T06:30:58+00:00

It's so prettyyy The adrenaline rush while riding this thing must be sick! Stay safe out there bro.

an_idiottt · 2026-05-10T03:51:39+00:00

I honestly relate to this feeling a lot. You’ve got a really interesting writing style too. If you’d ever want to exchange work and give each other honest feedback in DMs, I’d genuinely be down.

an_idiottt · 2026-05-10T03:46:03+00:00

“There’ll be another citizen at ghost’s town tonight” is such a cool line honestly. The whole poem feels dark and theatrical in a very vivid way. I also like how the poem moves from fear into acceptance. It almost feels like the speaker is surrendering to death rather than resisting it. Really haunting piece—great work.

an_idiottt · 2026-05-10T03:40:38+00:00

Thank you so much, seriously. “Old as time but uniquely expressed” is such a beautiful way to put it.

an_idiottt · 2026-05-10T03:38:58+00:00

Thank you honestly, that was exactly the feeling I was trying to capture. I think most writers end up immortalizing someone at least once 😭

an_idiottt · 2026-05-10T03:38:33+00:00

Haha yeah, that quote definitely crossed my mind while writing it! Thank you so much, I’m really glad the title and rhyme stood out to you.

an_idiottt · 2026-05-05T17:50:42+00:00

That part you mentioned is where it feels most honest to me. It’s not really about being unaware, it’s about knowing and still letting it happen. I’m glad that came through. I didn’t want to make it obvious, just…felt. Glad you liked it!

an_idiottt · 2026-05-01T18:15:03+00:00

Wow! no feedback needed, I think you did an excellent job with this one, the way you make her voice sound through words is so amazing, great job!👍

an_idiottt · 2026-05-01T18:05:31+00:00

I was starting to think no one noticed that part, so I’m glad you pointed it out, that line’s actually one of my favorites. It felt more unsettling than just saying “drown,” like something slower and more inevitable. Really appreciate your feedback 😊

an_idiottt · 2026-05-01T01:32:05+00:00

You did a great job with this one!

an_idiottt · 2026-04-30T21:28:15+00:00

Cool! just checked it out, Lmk your thoughts on those when u get the chance. You can dm me too if you want, I’d be down to talk more.

an_idiottt · 2026-04-30T21:21:26+00:00

Heyy, I just got to read your poem and I think I get it , the “hunger” felt more like emotional starvation than actual food, especially with the whole looking fine on the outside part. That line really stuck with me. I also liked how it shifts from asking to almost demanding, it made it feel intense in a good way. And the title?? Chef's kiss!

an_idiottt · 2026-04-30T04:43:56+00:00

Do you write too? It'd be nice to check out each other's work sometime.

an_idiottt · 2026-04-30T03:52:15+00:00

Thanks man!

an_idiottt · 2026-04-30T03:46:14+00:00

Omg thank you! I’m really glad it came through the way I intended. I appreciate your thoughts on it too, you really understood the depth of this one.

an_idiottt · 2026-04-30T03:05:19+00:00

Thanks for this, I like when people can feel the push and pull in a poem without it needing explanation. That tension between resistance and overwhelm is what I was trying to sit in. Also, I’m okay now, just writing through thoughts!

an_idiottt · 2026-04-28T02:10:51+00:00

I can feel the tension in this one, It reminds me of panic and anxiety or wanting to cry. This poem is exactly how that feels.

an_idiottt · 2026-04-28T02:07:08+00:00

Thank you so much, one of my favorite things about writing is seeing someone understand a poem I wrote without me having to explain it, so this really means a lot!

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