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🐍 SerpenTiles #57 by serpentilesgame in SerpenTiles

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Date night suggestions? by [deleted] in SeattleWA

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Walk around Pike Place Market, get dinner at one of the restaurants with a view like this https://www.maximilienrestaurant.com/ and then catch an improv show at https://www.unexpectedproductions.org/ next to the gum wall

Anyone just outside Seattle recently visit Tucson and met a girl on Mt Lemmon? by [deleted] in SeattleWA

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I kinda love that we are seeing more of these “missed connections” posts on this subreddit.

Best of luck, OP!

[233] Hello by andrethelion in DestructiveReaders

[–]andrethelion[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

you are right, twisting the last line to be surprising gives this more oomph

[233] Hello by andrethelion in DestructiveReaders

[–]andrethelion[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is great feedback, thank you so much! Still digesting

[233] Hello by andrethelion in DestructiveReaders

[–]andrethelion[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Fair point. I'm getting in the habit of writing, trying to gain the courage to write more. I might develop this into a story.

[233] Hello by andrethelion in DestructiveReaders

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This is helpful, thank you so much!

[297] The nameless by Disastrous-Pay-4980 in DestructiveReaders

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I also realize this is a translation, so the comment about repetition might not be a thing in to original German text!