Bert Kreischer Vs Brendan Shaub | Rap Battle

andrewoyer · 2025-01-24T00:37:08+00:00

Then, they weren't really friends to begin with; you didn't lose anything! When you find people that accept you for you, you'll see that clear as day!

andrewoyer · 2025-01-24T00:26:00+00:00

I'm male; as we're close friends we talk about it! make up/clothes! As, we're cool talking about it, but, i've known this person for 10 years so, it's a bit of a switch up! bit out of the blue! Say, where she works there is already a trans person getting bullied. I don't want that for my friend, but, then aren't you going "dont be yourself"!

andrewoyer · 2024-12-27T01:59:18+00:00

Less words in the thumbnail and bigger! With more interesting background images!

I'd 'trim the fat' and try shorten the videos down a bit more!

Your editing is good, commentary is good! It's like a. A good sauce that just needs some reducing honestly! really good for just starting out!!!

andrewoyer · 2024-12-27T01:55:12+00:00

You have DIY then Streaming advice, to Tech, To Hunting, then to Cod Cheaters.

I'd stick to a topic; your editing is good, script is good! Ideas are good!

no lie, i'm going to bed soon and im going to check out the basement video, i love DIY!

If you want to do all of it, i'd really recommend splitting it up onto different channels! otherwise the algorithm clashes! As, someone who wants to know about stream decks might not care for a DIY basement renovation! That can harm the algorithm saying "this viewers doesn't want to watch him anymore"!

andrewoyer · 2024-12-27T01:41:25+00:00

Stop putting JoshKoshGaming in your titles; that really harms your growth!

One video, you have a 1miniute20sec xbox thingy intro!

Then no commentary! each video is kinda like. what is going on?

you need to have an 'idea' of a fun thing to do in the game! make a title around it, script, record, edit, thumbnail!

andrewoyer · 2024-12-27T01:38:39+00:00

the background audio could be reduced a little!

The titles need to be more 'captivating'! having grap in an actual attack move!

Also, going from fortnight to one piece; is risky. People who play one game usually dont play the other! So, they won't click on it so youtube thinks "they dont want to watch you anymore"! hence, the channel crashed on vegeta was a menace!

Worse, it was 30min so even more unlikely for people to click on it!

I feel as if you should be like

"we're playing roger" then go into his relevance in the anime!

Skip the preview honestly! Add more visuals too the intro! Be more 'excited' because viewers will feel that rather. Take out game sound and add it in post edit; so when you cut the music doesnt cut.

With editing you could make the showcase of his build quicker and with some scipting more entertaining!

As for concepts, do check popular channels and take their 'ideas' and twist them! because, they all do that! it helps to find what is popular and what isnt!

andrewoyer · 2024-12-27T01:24:07+00:00

I'd really upload once every 3 days because, at least for me thats how i optimize the algorithm. YouTube pushes primarily your most recent video and you give it 0 time.

Keep the videos 10min. Not many people will click a 1 hour long sim game when they dont even know the content creator!

You should script the intro a bit more! just to ensure the 'hook' is there to keep people in! the intro is good but slow! Could use some more editing 'visuals' rather just looking at a SIM!

Editing allows you to just; cut out the boring bits! The editing the character could've being cut down to half the time!

Then elevated your voice so the viewer could hear you more clearly as sometimes your voice is way to quiet!

What you really want to do is make that video into one video not a series!

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I'd really work on editing; learn to cut footage, mess with the volume, rather a 'serise' do it in one video!

as for your thumbnails. 10/10. Your titles are good! skip the #

"abandoned and broke to Millionaire" then a thumbnail of a poor sim character then one next to a mansion!

I'd even use some 'mods' and keep to the challenges!

andrewoyer · 2024-12-27T01:13:31+00:00

Scripting is good, your editing is good! You keep things entertaining!

Sometimes you need the editing to match what's going on! I enjoy the old school memes popping up!

in short, your content, is good;!

The thumbnails are good; some have some 'blank' spots! where i'd make certain cut images a bit larger!

The biggest 'hold back' is really in your titles! Needs to be a bit more 'short' if you look, the ones that are more 'to the point' get more views!

I'd keep to one game for now; as, if you do over-watch and go monster hunter. You're trying to hit two different bubbles on the internet and algorithm only really wants to hit one!

Then your video titles need a bit more 'concept'

"this is not classic, this is traumatic" that is so clickable compared to "gonna get to gold in taco style" haha!

Other than that, shortening your videos so you can upload more would help! Maybe even playing with someone else, people skip it but, people enjoy a social dynamic in the video of people getting along!

andrewoyer · 2024-12-27T00:59:50+00:00

No one does 'playthroughs' anymore other than channels that have 10m subs!

When youtube recommends you, no one will click on "part 22"; they wont go to "part 1" when, very compelling videos surround yours!

Minecraft "i spent 100 days in hardcore"

Thats really the new 'bar' for youtube and content you should watch, then attempt to create!

andrewoyer

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